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Monochromatic Tears

monochromatic clouds stagnated within space rush hour traffic abounds vitreous tears coat cheeks time halts to screeching stops as you took your last breath

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Date: 5/10/2025 7:36:00 AM
I can feel this one! I remember the drive back to the hospice facility… Congrats!
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Sara Jama
Date: 5/11/2025 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much. Yes unfortunately I have similar memories too.
Date: 5/7/2025 11:23:00 PM
This could be referring to the pope , my interpretation. Bol
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Sara Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 5:01:00 AM
Yes that's the beauty of poetry and art everyone interprets it differently.
Date: 5/7/2025 9:15:00 PM
This is so beautiful grumpy! I love the detailed imagery and your choice of words! So creatively youv presented this! Now im inspired to try this! But maybe not hah! Best wishes! Sending you light always
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Sara Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 4:36:00 AM
Thank you so much.

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