Monochromatic Tears

monochromatic clouds
stagnated within space 
rush hour traffic abounds 
vitreous tears coat cheeks
time halts to screeching stops
as you took your last breath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 7:36 AM
I can feel this one! I remember the drive back to the hospice facility… Congrats!
Jama Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 10:29 AM
Thank you so much. Yes unfortunately I have similar memories too.
Anaya Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 11:23 PM
This could be referring to the pope , my interpretation. Bol
Jama Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 5:01 AM
Yes that's the beauty of poetry and art everyone interprets it differently.
Empress Avatar
May 7, 2025 at 9:15 PM
This is so beautiful grumpy! I love the detailed imagery and your choice of words! So creatively youv presented this! Now im inspired to try this! But maybe not hah! Best wishes! Sending you light always
Jama Avatar
May 8, 2025 at 4:36 AM
Thank you so much.
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