Running Costs

"I ran behind a bus", said Ben,
“Saved a good five dollars again”.
“Oh fool!” dad exclaimed,
“My son, I’m ashamed.
Chasing cabs, you could’ve saved ten!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Riha Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 12:47 PM
This is funny! I loved it!
Roper Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 10:39 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sneha, great write for the contest! Great rhymes and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Cunningham Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 4:28 AM
Congratulations on your win Sneha. Regards Tom
Allison Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:05 PM
so lovely to read this again Sneha many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Sneha.
Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Very funny, Sneha. Congrats on your win.
Thomas Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Lolol Sneha this is a great one!
George   Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 4:20 AM
Great Limerick, Sneha. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 9:23 PM
A very clever and funny Limerick my friend! ; ) 7
Callus Avatar
January 13, 2017 at 11:14 AM
You truly have a sense of humour, Sneha:) Have not seen you around for quite some time...I assume you're busy studying! ~ Wishing you all the best for 2017!! Regards // paul
Flats Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 8:59 PM
SUPERB! LOL a bunch!!! Enjoyed ~ j
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 9:09 PM
GREAT job, Sneha. You are a clever young one!! Congrats to you.
Scars Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 9:09 AM
hahaha very cute Sneha :) Congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Norwood Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 10:35 PM
well done and congrats
Y. Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Hi Sneha, Lol! Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Smith Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 7:03 PM
Stopping by with congratulations
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Great humour Sneha:-) Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
Hoffman Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Cute and clever one Sneha! G/L in the contest!:)
Smith Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 12:22 PM
lol...loved it
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