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Runaway Train (Inkling)

an inclination for the fugitive..... prolific train of thought run..... a whim in full gallop.....

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2010 4:20:00 PM

love that whim in full gallop line! CONGRATS!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/20/2010 3:16:00 AM

Congratulations, Rick, on your top 10 win in this contest! Very nice. Smiles, Dane Ann

Cecil Hickman

Date: 5/19/2010 10:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,,a marvelous and truly interesting Kimo poemand a very interesting angle for the inspiration as well,,thank You for your words left after reading mine,,Blessings..Cecil

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2010 12:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Irma's "Runaway Train"contest Rick. Good Luck in her next contest. Love, Carol

Mitch White

Date: 5/19/2010 5:53:00 AM

Congrats Rick- interesting Kimo- I shall look into this form

James Fraser

Date: 5/19/2010 3:32:00 AM

This really is a terrific little piece Rick, and it really had to be in with the winners, and i am so glad it made it. Many congrats and may there be many more >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2010 7:43:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your winning poem in the Runaway Train contest... powerhouse ..three lines said it all to the winners circle...with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2010 6:35:00 PM

Very impresssssssive,, with the fugitive Kimo. Congrats. in your placement on my contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2010 12:58:00 PM

Hey, this looks like one great entry!! Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/18/2010 12:23:00 PM

Wish you good luck in the contest, Rick!! Haven't tried this "Kimo" Form as yet...seems interesting...and thanks for leaving comments on my winning poem...Peace, love, audrey

James Fraser

Date: 5/18/2010 11:57:00 AM

Kool Kimo Rick, good luck in Irma's contest >> James

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2010 7:17:00 PM

Nice kimo - stuffed with images. Good luck

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2010 4:39:00 PM

How interesting and inventive Rick.. good luck with this one.. SOUP MAIL in a few minutes..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/17/2010 2:47:00 PM

hey we're all on the same train??? LOL Please read and comment for me on Part 1 When Madness Rides on Moonlight & Part 2..(they're under the "P's) Light & Love

Amy Green

Date: 5/17/2010 11:47:00 AM

Nice :) Very cool!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/17/2010 7:41:00 AM

amazing, thought Rick, good luck, in the contest,..p.d.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/17/2010 7:37:00 AM

Love that last line!! "a whim in full gallop...! Wonderful description !! Good luck!