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Run for the hills, just pack up and go, Today, right now, right here, Turn off the net, hop in the car, And slowly just disappear, From the world of plain, go to the beach, To the waves where each is anew, Let every small wave roll over your feet, Every wave that comes from the blue, Bringing a healthy revive, energise and restore, To relight your emotional flame, Just let the waves keep breaking over your skin, Removing the tired old same. Then, after a night, return to your home, Without the hurt, pain and ache, Return back to your world of living with fire, With a colourful vibrant awake.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/4/2017 7:36:00 PM
Sometimes a little time away can do wonders ! Great write Lewis.
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Date: 12/4/2017 7:48:00 PM
I need to go soon, very soon, thanks Judy
Date: 12/4/2017 5:44:00 PM
Positive poem...And cool too...All the best Lewis
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Date: 12/4/2017 7:13:00 PM
thank you Arturo, glad you like this one :)

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