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Ruin

A building ruin touches my heart Its days of worthiness are now gone. Its French doors are now falling apart crumbled bricks inhabit one-time-lawn Weeds climb trellis instead of lace vine Honeysuckle no longer calls bees. Bush roses at last gave way to time wind caused an awkward list to the trees. No more wrong key clanks on piano or children giggling, whispering tales No longer young lovers 'neath willow No more fish stories becoming whales. Those bygone days are to be no more Laughter, anger, happiness, sorrow. Its walls bore all, quietly they wore until using up its tomorrows. April 5, 2023 for 'Writing Challenge--R Words' contest by Constance La France howmanysyllables.com=9 2nd

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Date: 4/8/2023 10:39:00 AM
Rather melancholy Ann - I like it. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/7/2023 12:57:00 PM
- A place that was very beautiful a long, long time ago... sad to see it become a ruin, Ann - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/7/2023 3:55:00 AM
"Its walls bore all, quietly they wore until using up its tomorrows." Love these lines Heidi ! The whole poem projects decay and creates an uneasy sensation. Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 4/6/2023 9:11:00 PM
A very capturing story of a ruined building. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/6/2023 8:29:00 PM
Ann excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 4/6/2023 8:15:00 PM
Your thoughts are profound and uplifting. Congratulations on your podium win.
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:06:00 PM
I can picture this building, once so strong, beautiful writing Ann
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