Ruin

A building ruin touches my heart
Its days of worthiness are now gone.
Its French doors are now falling apart
crumbled bricks inhabit one-time-lawn

Weeds climb trellis instead of lace vine
Honeysuckle no longer calls bees.
Bush roses at last gave way to time
wind caused an awkward list to the trees.

No more wrong key clanks on piano
or children giggling, whispering tales
No longer young lovers 'neath willow
No more fish stories becoming whales.

Those bygone days are to be no more
Laughter, anger, happiness, sorrow.
Its walls bore all, quietly they wore
until using up its tomorrows.

April 5, 2023
for 'Writing Challenge--R Words' contest
by Constance La France
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 10:39 AM
Rather melancholy Ann - I like it. Congratulations on your win! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 12:57 PM
- A place that was very beautiful a long, long time ago... sad to see it become a ruin, Ann - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
George Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 3:55 AM
"Its walls bore all, quietly they wore until using up its tomorrows." Love these lines Heidi ! The whole poem projects decay and creates an uneasy sensation. Congratulations on your great win.
Alex Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 9:11 PM
A very capturing story of a ruined building. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:29 PM
Ann excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Poet Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Your thoughts are profound and uplifting. Congratulations on your podium win.
Bueckert Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 7:06 PM
I can picture this building, once so strong, beautiful writing Ann
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