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For contest despite challenges writing for Miranda Hawley's contest.

Rudolph’s Broken Leg

The reindeer games included basket ball
Guess who bruised his brain from a freaky fall
And broke his leg all in vain, his red nose raw
Rudolph is his name but he can’t answer calls

For Santa’s hot line rings but broken leg
Is just as bad as Rudolph’s bruised head
But he has an idea maybe work from home
By delivery service of his silver drone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Congratulation on your win. Sorry, I am late. I took a couple of days off. I enjoyed reading your creative/fun write. Guess AI is now taking over Rudolph’s job. Have a fun day as you write away..................
Jones Avatar
January 14, 2025 at 1:22 PM
No apologies needed dear Paula and thanks
Woods Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Interesting solution! Congratulations Karen! Xo
Jones Avatar
January 12, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Crystol!
Hawley Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 8:52 PM
I like the work from home idea and the silver drone. This is a fun creative solution. Congrats on your win in my contest.
Jones Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 10:21 PM
Miranda thanks for the honor and for sponsoring a fun engaging contest!
Healey Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 2:30 PM
So even Rudolph works from home now! Congratulations on your winning placement. I also wrote about his broken leg! Take care Karen. Cheers from Canada. Jim
Jones Avatar
January 11, 2025 at 3:29 PM
lol thanks! I’ll pop over to read yours!
George Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 12:19 AM
So, there is a solution to every problem. Enjoyed reading this interesting poem about Rudolph's broken leg. Wish you a Happy New Year, dear Karen.
Jones Avatar
January 4, 2025 at 12:25 AM
Happy New Year sweet Valsa!
Smith Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 9:56 PM
Interesting and poem with a sensible solution good thing children's presents made at North Pole by elves at no cost and delivered in bulk as where presents for adults have post post and handling added that can for one item require a re calculation as to bargain or no bargain. clever poem. Regards David
Jones Avatar
January 1, 2025 at 12:52 AM
Thanks for reading David and Happy New Year!
Bell Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 11:44 AM
Think Rudolph broke his leg deliberately. Probably watching netflix and relaxing now.
Jones Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:37 PM
lol Good for Rudolph I say Paul! Have a happy new year!
Read Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Hi Karen, there's always Amazon to help out lol. Sending you my love and best wishes for the new year God bless. xx
Jones Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 9:48 AM
Thanks John. Happy New Year!
Cunningham Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 12:44 AM
Lol, I suppose it's the way forward now. Technology has made the reindeer redundant. Happy New year to you Karen. Tom
Jones Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:52 AM
Yes but the flying reindeer are more fun don’t you think? Happy New Year Tom!
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