Rudderless

Dear Valsa, your brilliant brevity shines upon the poetic page with metaphorical beauty and wisdom. Indeed, life’s unpredictable currents may cast us on unexpected shores.. which may or may not be a blessing. Your artistry never fails to amaze me, my inspiring friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

So beautiful, Valsa! Congratulations!@

Nicely done, Valsa! Congratulations!

Lovely Valsa Congratulations on your win! :)

Interesting form for a contest. You've done well with this Tanka, Valsa. Good luck in the contest! Bill

I really like this and sure believe the message.

No matter how well one deals with life's struggles, still, no one can predict one's destiny. Intensely realistic Valsa! Love it...ab

We do need to hang on, Valsa. Although i agree does seem like the current is becoming too strong. Harry

Wow. Have you ever read 'The Great Gatsby,' Valsa. You've summed up the whole book in five lines!! Bravo! ~ Mr. Lite Rati

What a thrill! Beats boredom every day, doesn't it? Aloha!

Perfect poem.

- Words of wisdom, Valsa :) -

Amen love it, for man is directed by the tongue and by this we can tell what directs there path, as a large ships rudder it what directs it path, we should take notice of this wonderful poem and seek what directs our path, not to be being tossed around in the sea,but grab ahold of that boat with a rudder headed straight back to shore, love and God bless

Very well penned Tanka, Valsa. Your imagery is striking here. Best of luck in the contest.

I like the metaphoric write, Valsa. So well written. Best to you.

Reads like a good contender to me for Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Sometimes life feels like that then we reach a tranquil harbour and all is well again. Enjoy your week ahead Valsa. Tom