Royal Oak

King Charles hides amongst the tree’s branches; his enemy walks below vainly searching for him.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/15/2012 4:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Knew it was a winner..Sara

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2012 9:55:00 AM

Wow! Very different and original. Congrats...BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2012 12:45:00 AM

good to see you made the winners' list. congrats, my friend.

Christopher Bunton

Date: 3/13/2012 3:44:00 PM

Congratulations!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/13/2012 11:59:00 AM

Congrats Jack on your win.Enjoyed the read.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/13/2012 5:38:00 AM

Congratulations for your placement in this contest Jack. Love, Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/11/2012 6:57:00 PM

Wow, this is such a glorious piece of art! I can see why this would be titled a Royal Oak! I sure hope the enemy misses him, ha ha! I really enjoyed your write that I have read this evening! I love this poem! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2012 5:19:00 PM

wow, so clever. the image of royal oak used for both man and tree. Love your way of thinking, my friend!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2012 2:09:00 PM

Cleverly written as well as a clever King..Enjoyed reading today..Reads like winners' circle for sure..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the always kind reviews..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2012 11:30:00 AM

a magnificent portrait Jack.. visualizing the scenario luv.. good luck if for a contest here on PS..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/11/2012 7:50:00 AM

and no one ever looks up for answers... interesting Kimo. I have never attempted one of these Jack. nice job of it.Thank you for your comment. Have a great rest of your weekend