Roses For Pd

Weeping Rose


Black is her color,
The empty space where her heart use to be.
Weeping in pain,
Pain for the ones who hurt her.

Torn are her thorns,
The thorns that tightly held onto him.
Fragile is the rose,
The rose you just destroyed.





By.Michael Deas

Dedicated to Destroyer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 11:20 PM
Congratulations Michael. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your great win in P.D.'s "Roses For P.D." contest Michael. Love, Carol
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February 13, 2012 at 7:13 AM
Congratulations Michael xx
Williams Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Michael congrats on your win..David
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 7:34 PM
Congratulations on your win in PD's contest........S.Ronthorpe
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 7:20 PM
congrats Michael on a terrific third place win for this tremendous write on roses for PD luv..
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February 12, 2012 at 4:06 PM
Congratulations on your win Michael, love Elizabeth
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February 12, 2012 at 1:57 PM
MICHAEL, it has been an honor sponsoring my rose contest. (-: !!CONGRATULATION'S!! :-) HOW COULD I BE EVER SO THANKFUL FOR POETS LIKE you and everyone else HERE ON THE SOUP. I'm sending each and everyone roses right back. @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- @};- .. here's a warm TEXAS ~HUG~ Have yourself a Happy Valentine's Day *always * PD
Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Seriously". A well deserved win Michael. Love, Carol
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February 12, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Hi Michael - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Debbie's contest! Best wishes, Kory
Pettit Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 6:32 PM
A very descriptive poem. Congratulations on attaining honorable mention in Debbie's contest with this entry.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Congrats Michael on your HM in Debbie's contest with this amazing entry and write luv.. enjoy your very special honor ...
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