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Rose Piper

Southbound tracks of opportunity with dreams flying by He pushed on through the hills so that she might survive gripping tight in all hope, the train rolled on out of sight with a longing and a brush of abstract strokes she creates their life she painted her longing as each soul passed her by waiting for a return of a man on a cold winters night Rose Piper Painting~"Slow down freight train"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/9/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry X 3 making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals ^Rick. Love Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 3:53:00 PM
Congrad's on getting ALL three of your verses through round 1 of the sites International Contest! Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:49:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest luv...
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Date: 3/6/2011 5:48:00 PM
Wow I am so thrilled for you and mega impressed a three for! "dram flying" I hear you! Congrad's on ALL 3 of your submissions making it to round 2! Light & Love
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Rick. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:37:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your featured poem this week my friend.. on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv...
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Date: 10/5/2010 3:27:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your win in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful write and win tonight my friend.. enjoy your victory with luv..
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:10:00 PM
Rick, , Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun reading your entry and selecting this fine poem for my contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations Rick on your win in P.D.'s contest " Any Poem Goes* Any Poem". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2010 6:38:00 PM
VERY nicely done, Rick. And the topic itself so unusual!
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:50:00 PM
Where can I see this painting, Rick? I love the way you describe it. Excellent poem! Love, carolyn
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Date: 8/9/2010 2:56:00 PM
Reads like an interesting painting to view..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2010 2:31:00 PM
Lovely and expressive Rick.. such imagery in your emotional lines.. with luv.. enjoyed..
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Date: 8/9/2010 2:17:00 PM
Nice write my friend...always a pleasure to read...Michael
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