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Rose Gardens

The prickly green shrubs, Unfold their crimson petals; Kissed by morning mist.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/21/2009 8:02:00 AM
Irresistible ... beautiful again.
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:32:00 PM
Roses are dear to my heart and so is this haiku. Loved it, it's going to my favs.
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Date: 5/17/2009 1:51:00 PM
The opening of a new day, told by the plants, nice write - James
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Date: 5/15/2009 9:25:00 AM
Hi Raul such a lovely feel to this, it makes me feel happy and that is always a nice feeling to have thanks love Ann.
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Date: 5/15/2009 9:24:00 AM
Hi Raul such a lovely feel to this, it makes me feel happy and that is always a nice feeling to have thanks love Ann.
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Date: 5/15/2009 8:35:00 AM
A beautiful aroma especially L3.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/15/2009 7:09:00 AM
This is a beautiful scene in my sleepy morning eyes....hmmmmm...loved it! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/15/2009 5:52:00 AM
Absolutely rich and lush in its vision. So beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/15/2009 5:27:00 AM
Dear Sensei Raul, Another Great Haiku YOUR Talent touches all who read YOU ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call
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Date: 5/15/2009 3:05:00 AM
A beautiful vision, Raul. love, Kristin
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Date: 5/15/2009 12:51:00 AM
Amazing picture painted here of elegance and beauty. Roses are so fragile and yet so strong. Your way with words has left me in awe as I can picture so clearly the mist of the morning gracing each delicate petal. Wonderful writing. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/15/2009 12:44:00 AM
Exquisite!
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:17:00 PM
Even with their "prickly" thorns, the roses always bask in glory, providing inspiration for peoms like this. Beautiful, Raul! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2009 9:00:00 PM
A beautiful description. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/14/2009 8:52:00 PM
AH! Sigh..... This is just breathtaking, every line is painted so beautifully. Thank you for sharing with us Raul!
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