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Rose Gardens

The prickly green shrubs, Unfold their crimson petals; Kissed by morning mist.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/21/2009 8:02:00 AM

Irresistible ... beautiful again.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 5/18/2009 11:32:00 PM

Roses are dear to my heart and so is this haiku. Loved it, it's going to my favs.

James Fraser

Date: 5/17/2009 1:51:00 PM

The opening of a new day, told by the plants, nice write - James

Ann Anderson

Date: 5/15/2009 9:25:00 AM

Hi Raul such a lovely feel to this, it makes me feel happy and that is always a nice feeling to have thanks love Ann.

Ann Anderson

Date: 5/15/2009 9:24:00 AM

Hi Raul such a lovely feel to this, it makes me feel happy and that is always a nice feeling to have thanks love Ann.

Brian Strand

Date: 5/15/2009 8:35:00 AM

A beautiful aroma especially L3.Rgds Brian

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2009 7:09:00 AM

This is a beautiful scene in my sleepy morning eyes....hmmmmm...loved it! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/15/2009 5:52:00 AM

Absolutely rich and lush in its vision. So beautiful. Love, Shar

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/15/2009 5:27:00 AM

Dear Sensei Raul, Another Great Haiku YOUR Talent touches all who read YOU ALWAYS...HG Soup Mail Call

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/15/2009 3:05:00 AM

A beautiful vision, Raul. love, Kristin

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/15/2009 12:51:00 AM

Amazing picture painted here of elegance and beauty. Roses are so fragile and yet so strong. Your way with words has left me in awe as I can picture so clearly the mist of the morning gracing each delicate petal. Wonderful writing. Smiles from Lolita