Another one too late for the contest
must try harder!
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Rose Petals Summer’s gems Romantic blooms On fortified stems A thorny treasure chest Stood in their resplendent best Summer’s first bloom; a lovers gift Alas, grasshoppers leap when they're sniffed So flick them away before she has seen Pray nothing lands on her - six legs and green Then be as romantic as you wish With plans so very noble… ish For no girl can shun a rose Its scent so very sweet Sweeps them off their feet But then she gasps “HAY FEVER!” Her voice Rasps
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