ROSE

I was born cradled inside your palm within the perimeters of a safe haven brought to life by loving silty fingers Rose is what I heard you call me staying true to my appellative name I chose to bloom inside your heart Many butterflies and bumblebees sat on my flowerhead but only you were the apple of my eye, dear heart I was born to please you and only you enclosed and surrounded I thrived, like a rose, in a tangled mess of flowers.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/18/2024 8:59:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. What a lovely "Rose" flower write. I love pink roses. We both did the rose... Have a wonderful day writing away.................

Karen Jones

Date: 3/17/2024 7:20:00 PM

Your lovely poem is a winner! Congratulations Mystic Rose Rose!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/17/2024 2:21:00 PM

Mystic, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful poem!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/17/2024 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Tania, I am delighted that you like it, :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2024 7:43:00 AM

- Beautiful ... you are my rose :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/17/2024 3:18:00 PM

Thanks Anne, that is most precious to hear !

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/15/2024 2:38:00 AM

so wonderful, a rose among roses, rose and rose, twice are talented and heartful, have a sweet week end poet

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/17/2024 3:19:00 PM

Thanks you for your kind words Yann

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/12/2024 4:20:00 PM

beautiful and emotional personification, dear Rose. The words have multiple layers and meanings making this poem deep and thought provoking. Nicely done, Rose! hugs and blessings, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/12/2024 6:15:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed the poem Sara, thanks for your visit, take care :)

Silent One

Date: 3/12/2024 12:49:00 PM

Deep and emotive personification, so beautifully done my friend..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/12/2024 6:14:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the poem Silent, often I wonder if we were flowers, what would we feel ? how would we be ? thanks for dropping into my poetry page :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/12/2024 9:41:00 AM

Dear Rose, You beautifully capture the bond between a nurturer and the nurtured. The imagery of being cradled inside a palm and brought to life by loving fingers evokes a sense of security and warmth. The repetition of "Rose" emphasizes the name's significance, symbolizing a blooming connection within the heart. Your poetic words tenderly express the dedication to bringing joy to the beloved, reminiscent of a flourishing rose amidst a tangled garden. Rose, This is a heartfelt portrayal of love and devotion. - Blessings, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/12/2024 6:14:00 PM

Your in depth comments bring value to my poem Daniel, a poem is just a poem until it is truly felt and seen, so thank you for your visit :)

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 3/12/2024 1:48:00 AM

A beautiful poem. Well written.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/12/2024 6:13:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the poem Jeanette, thank you for your kind visit