Romanticism

When I am old I want
You by my side walking 
In the forrest in the early 
Morning breeze. Hand in mine, 
Still loving each other.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Anish Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Hope you enjoy many more morning breezes. Thanks you for your kind words. Yours Matthew Anish
Chircop Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 5:07 PM
what a beautful dream...blesses those who survive to live it--beautiful write--Charma
Fraser Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 4:18 PM
Beautiful tender poem Doris>>James
Dvorkis Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 12:55 PM
what a lovely thought. sometimes you can tell if the right person will still be around after that much time, since tragically 50% of marriages don't give people this opportunity. I feel I've found mine with my fiancee. I'm hoping you did to.
Lopez Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 10:23 AM
there is something magical about a long lasting marriage.....very romantic!!!!!!!
Richards Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 9:00 AM
That is what love should be..... loving for always and always, through the years...what a lovely poem! Carrie
Moreno Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 1:40 AM
A forest walk is romantic Doris, my mind lives in the forest...Raul
Strand Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 12:16 AM
Tender heartfelt poetry Doris.Thanks for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
Hickman Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 9:54 PM
this is full of deep emotion and more,,blessings..Cecil
Canady Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 5:18 PM
Very Beautiful... and True of All True Lovers... MoonBee
Culverhouse Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 4:45 PM
a lady can dream can't she??
Loving Iii Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 3:42 PM
"Still loving each other?" boy, do you need some tip's from your mother. jhl
Kendrick Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 3:04 PM
I hope that it happens. Wish you the best. Keep writing. Mom
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