Romantic Thoughts - Nothing More

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Every night Sea rises at high tide His waves are like warm frothy fingers caressing Moon's golden glow on the shore It's a game they play with ebb and flow Hide and seek. She has a flirtacious streak when shrouding herself behind a veil of clouds Eternal lovers who share intimate moments romantic thoughts ~ nothing more

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 5/1/2025 6:33:00 PM

Very sooth smooth romantic poem! Very enjoyed read! Have a nice time ~ AA

Lin Lane
Date: 5/2/2025 1:42:00 AM

Thanks a lot, AA.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/1/2025 12:50:00 PM

Picturesque and heartwarming, I love the metaphors.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/2/2025 1:41:00 AM

Thank you very much, Hilda.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2025 12:17:00 PM

Your "Romantic Thoughts - Nothing More" is a lovely write/story in just 8 lines. What a pretty picture you have here. Love your write and picture. Sure wish I was walking on your pretty beach feeling the sand and water on my feet. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away.............

Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2025 12:45:00 PM

It's not for a contest, Paula but thank you for liking this one. I've had that photo for some time, knowing it deserved a poem of some sort.

Ink Empress

Date: 5/1/2025 10:15:00 AM

Wow this is absolutely breathtaking dear linnersz, i love the way you've written this moon poem in few words, youv delivered one that gives the wow effect which is impressive! As an islander that sees the ocean all around me, i resonated with the opening line "Every night Sea rises at high tide His waves are like warm frothy fingers " gives not just a romantic ambience but also a very passionate and intimate scene that is worthy of a fave! Gorgeous! Now i feel like painting! Pleasure reading!sending you light always

Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2025 10:19:00 AM

Thank you, Ink. I'm sure your views of Sea and Moon are just a lovely, if not more so. I personify them as that couple who are truly star-crossed lovers. Kinda makes me sad.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/1/2025 10:12:00 AM

You created a beautiful romantic scene Lin. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2025 10:17:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. They're my favorite romantic characters. I wish they could touch but then the whole world would be in a whole lot of trouble.