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Romantic Ramblings About the Ultimate Man

You’re the finest man I have ever seen You are handsome and strong Virile Full bodied Beautiful to the eyes Alluring to the hands Your lips Send messages “Come and taste And never thirst again” Your eyes Changing hues Like the sea The sky In between Iris pools where I love to swim Liquid pleasures draw me The depth….unfathomable I dive deep Deeper still Till I am breathless Needing to resurface Your mind Fertile A garden Laden with fruit For my hungry soul I devour your wisdom It is sweet to my mouth Honey clings to each word and sweetens my inner soul I can listen spellbound As you expound The mysteries Of existence and time The intricacies of the world above And the world below And the world within Oh…the world within The best of them all How you enter it with confidence My little world You stride Confident and bold Knowing I worship the ground you walk on I worship you...body and soul I stop breathing With your proximity Afraid that my breath Will betray me forming itself Into a perfumed message from my heart confessing my idolatry So I keep silent I hold my breath I look away Overwhelmed by your beauty You are the ultimate MAN The incarnation of Every woman’s fantasy Your body a haven Your arms the walls of safety You protect A bastion of strength A fortress of comfort A perpetual knight To my damsel in distress You hear my unspoken cries And come galloping You whisk me away To your castled heart Where you allay Every fear With that smile the drawbridge to your soul The royal seal You’ve sealed me with “All is well I am here I am...HERE. Shhhh..... Lay in my arms Put your head on my chest Rest....rest.” Oh...that slow easy smile That rivals the sun For it cannot compete With the heat Your smile births in me The sun scorches from outside in You scorch from inside out I melt With that sweet smile Oh what of your touch? A brush of your hand And I grow faint And your smile broadens Sending flares For you know I’m prepared For your entry to my inner sanctum You are the ultimate in creation Desire’s ultimate desire fulfilled Passion’s passionate plea For perfection... You are And here is the mystery You are here with me In me In my body soul and mind You reside You reign...supreme Never to be dethroned But to be adored And my muted celebration of praise Is heard only by the stars But you will see its sparkle Here in my eyes Tonight When our two worlds Collide Flaming into paradise Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/18/2014 8:33:00 AM
Hi Eileen. Gosh, your poem was like looking in a mirror! :\ Well, maybe not, but you make me wish it was, lol. Beautiful, but you sure do set a high bar! ;)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2014 8:40:00 AM
HI, JR....That was the point. I was trying to be silly...but to be honest, in my heart...I dream of such a man! Glad you saw him in the mirror! What could be better! :) Thanks for the lovely visit and post.
Date: 8/16/2014 9:00:00 PM
I'm on my way over...Your passion and sensual nature are shining here Eileen...I am a romantic and this is topshelf...when I thought it couldn't get any better it kept getting better...Straight to my favs....Thanks for being you....hugs Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2014 8:41:00 AM
Passion and sensuality are very dear to me TIM....you know that! Hey...save up for the ticket! Lebanon is a FAR FAR way away! I know you are a romantic....one of the things I admire most about you. Glad it gets better...Thanks for saving...and for being YOU! Hugs
Date: 8/16/2014 4:50:00 PM
How do you know that he is a fantasy? He may be right beside you and you have not seen his true self. You write with such passion that this man will find you. I know of such a man but he does not know he is like that. We will wait and see if he can emerge for real. Love what you portray and hope he finds you and makes you supremely happy Hugs and more hugs my dear Edith mamabear
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/16/2014 5:11:00 PM
:) Mama Bear...I have no right to expect when I, myself, am less than idea...so much less. This is a flight of fancy. There can be no one to fit this bill. It's a tall order....I just enjoyed being sixteen again....I'm a hopeless idealist and romantic. Life has knocked me around some, but I'm still here. Thanks for your visits. HUGS!!!!
Date: 8/16/2014 3:49:00 PM
- This man MUST I see .... a man PERFECT in every way - (A "blue"day can not erase colors of yesterday ..... smile :) - Happy weekend, dear friend Eileen! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/16/2014 5:11:00 PM
Let us go on a man hunt, Sunshine! ;) Hugs to you. Have a great weekend.
Date: 8/16/2014 1:07:00 PM
Now our little secret is out, my dearest Betty Boop! I knew you loved me but I had no idea you loved me so much! YEE HAW!!! Your secret lover man... Kenny XOXOX
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/16/2014 2:37:00 PM
Oh dear...what will we do now? ;) Kenny....you are a sweetie pie, you know that right? Hugs
Date: 8/16/2014 12:08:00 PM
Oh boy... or should I say, oh Man! Well where the heck is this ultimate hunk? Can you do me a favor, dear Eileen and send him my way? Chocolate truffles in exchange for him! I can make mean truffles, what you say?? haha! I sure enjoyed this write-- we can dream, can't we? Thanks for taking us along with your ramblings. I am one who rambles. A lot...too much for my own good sometimes.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/16/2014 2:39:00 PM
If I could but find him...Thanks for stopping by, my dear...This was truly a ramble...I could have gone on and on extolling this superman! Ah....Nice to meet a fellow rambler....Hugs to you, my dear. I like my men AND my chocolate...TOGETHER! ;) If you know what I mean...so....You need to come up with some other plan....
Date: 8/15/2014 11:34:00 PM
Wish he existed in real! I want to live ur dream Eileen, for once say that it's a real one, don't u break my heart dear! Appreciate ur prompt response n understanding!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/16/2014 2:01:00 PM
Ah...Dr Upma...I wish I could tell you so... Thank you for being so sweet to me. Life isn't easy for one with such a sensitive heart....
Date: 8/15/2014 10:11:00 PM
Dear Eileen, what I meant was that it's a perfect flawless fantasy n hence a masterpiece, and that why be a miser n u surely haven't been my dear! U hv rather described every aspect to the max! N applaud for the perfection, I admire the absolute pic of man u painted here, love it!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2014 11:25:00 PM
I understood you, Dr Upma...No worries. I LOVED your comment, and I love you! :) This man....is a dream man....he doesn't exist....oh but it would be so sweet if he did. :) Have a great day.
Date: 8/15/2014 9:04:00 PM
Your eyes sparkling like diamond love, a perfect lust for perfect trust. I'm awed by how total this love is, mind body soul, saturated with the Man of your dreams. This is a one of a kind love poem Eileen! " With that smile, the draw bridge to your soul..." Damn that's romantic! A masterpiece of adoration, companionship. A FAV. J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/16/2014 1:59:00 PM
Saturated...completely, Justin. Yes, that is the right word. You liked the drawbridge... :) I liked that bit too. Justin...a masterpiece...It's only because you are kind at heart. So thankful to have you here....visiting me. HUGS
Date: 8/15/2014 5:09:00 PM
Great going gal I loved you ramble through being in and falling to love - I don't believe there is such a thing as ultimate truth - truth is cultural, situation, ever-changing for we only assume what we know. Even things proved scientifically today can are usually are disproved in the future. The best you can do is say what is true for yourself at any given moment in time. Truth is subjective, not objective it depends on the point of view. Light & Love
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Date: 8/15/2014 12:59:00 PM
When you've found his and had your fill send him my way Eileen but I doubt this man ever exists! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 8/16/2014 4:06:00 AM
LOL Dave Love it my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/15/2014 3:46:00 PM
Oh OK - guess I know who my friends are LOL:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2014 3:43:00 PM
;) Yup....if he does, ain't no way I'm sharing! ;) Hugs, Jan. Thanks for dropping by.
Date: 8/15/2014 11:57:00 AM
Thank you for thinking and writing this about ME :) >winK<
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2014 3:42:00 PM
Good one, JS! ;) Thanks for passing by....The secret is out.
Date: 8/15/2014 8:55:00 AM
Perfect romantic Eileen ! Absolutely Wiser fantasy, why be a miser ?? Love ur bold writes ! Bravo my friend , splendid work!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2014 3:41:00 PM
;) Dr Upma...yes, why indeed? I don't like to be a miser...When I give I like to lavish. Thanks for the visit. Love it when you pass by.
Date: 8/15/2014 8:17:00 AM
This one makes me think of Solomon's psalms. Pretty amazing write Eillen. I agree with Leslie this would be an impossible role for a mere mortal. Yet if you are going to fantasize why hold back. Exceptional writing!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2014 8:42:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. Like you said....there are no limits to fantasy...and I'm determined to live in fantasy world. It helps when dealing with reality. I'm honest enough to know that there is every man's ideal woman. I know I don't fit that bill either. If there were such a man and such a women, poets would have nothing to write about....
Date: 8/15/2014 7:31:00 AM
Good write..but a role hard to fill for us guys...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/15/2014 8:41:00 AM
Thanks, Leslie. That was just my point...I'm in love with a dream, for he does not exist. Still....romance will never leave me, so...I can dream.

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