Romantic Love Observed

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From age's vantage post Romantic love found Life's journey bound A duet without a sound Waves crashing on the coast Eyes glancing, breath by breath Without any thought of death From one generation to another We merge to discover A moment of perfect symmetry

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/27/2018 9:09:00 PM

A deep and beautifully expressed poem Michael. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 12/13/2017 8:40:00 PM

Very nicely thought of...

Gracie Woodsinger

Date: 11/20/2017 5:45:00 PM

I love your poem. The writing is so strong and deep, and the rhymes are really clever. I like the last two lines best. I wondered though, what you meant, if it was by chance that this moment of perfect symmetry came about, or a higher power that guided it.

Edward Clapham

Date: 11/20/2017 2:09:00 AM

I like your deep thoughts, but speculate, is there an age gap to discover?

Beejadhur Sewumber

Date: 11/20/2017 12:06:00 AM

I like the poetic sound in this poem.Of course love is different for every individual.

Luis Estable

Date: 11/19/2017 9:48:00 PM

Although I don`t agree with some of the formulation of this poem, I do admit the almost every line is poetic, and that the flow of the poem has some merit. Thanks, Luis Estable