Romantic Love Observed

From age's vantage post
Romantic love found
Life's journey bound
A duet without a sound
Waves crashing on the coast
Eyes glancing, breath by breath
Without any thought of death
From one generation to another
We merge to discover
A moment of perfect symmetry

romanceromantic loverhyme

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Susan Ashley

January 27, 2018 at 9:09 PM

A deep and beautifully expressed poem Michael. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

J Hamilton Gist

December 13, 2017 at 8:40 PM

Very nicely thought of...

Gracie Woodsinger

November 20, 2017 at 5:45 PM

I love your poem. The writing is so strong and deep, and the rhymes are really clever. I like the last two lines best. I wondered though, what you meant, if it was by chance that this moment of perfect symmetry came about, or a higher power that guided it.

Edward Clapham

November 20, 2017 at 2:09 AM

I like your deep thoughts, but speculate, is there an age gap to discover?

Beejadhur Sewumber

November 20, 2017 at 12:06 AM

I like the poetic sound in this poem.Of course love is different for every individual.

Luis Estable

November 19, 2017 at 9:48 PM

Although I don`t agree with some of the formulation of this poem, I do admit the almost every line is poetic, and that the flow of the poem has some merit. Thanks, Luis Estable