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Romantic Interlude

Soft music plays a sultry serenade, Inviting a long, slow, dance. You claim me for your own. You hold me so close I feel your heartbeat. Your breath warm against my cheek, I sigh in contentment. As the music plays, there's only you, me, No one, nothing else exists. Your lips touch mine ... heaven! I am sleeping beauty and you, my prince. Your kiss awakens my heart. Fairy tales can come true. 12/25/11 Kim Merryman For SKAT-AB SIN THE's Old Romantic Poem contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2012 10:40:00 AM

ah, yes, the sleeping beauty type of poem. I know this well and I LOVE your take on it, Kim!!! Big congrats for your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2012 5:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot once more Kim love xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2012 8:55:00 PM

Kim, congratulations in the Skat, contest. Take Care PD

Skat A

Date: 12/14/2012 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/6/2012 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David's "Romance" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/2/2012 3:39:00 PM

This is one thing I don't do well at...romance poems! You on the other hand write them so well! I like how you make the simplest gestures intense. The closing lines make my heart leap. Just grand! Gwendolen

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/29/2011 7:18:00 PM

This is Sweeeet, Kim! Congratulations on your fine win, well deserved in David's contest. Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2011 6:00:00 PM

Oh, here is yet another goodie!! They are all wonderful, these romantic winning poems I am seeing.Congratulations, Kim!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2011 3:43:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/29/2011 11:55:00 AM

I love how you did yours in Kimo form Kim ;) absolutely love this!! Congratulations on your win in David's contest :) love Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/29/2011 11:52:00 AM

How awesome for you to have your fairytale come true! Gosh, reading all these romantic poems is making me rhyme all the time ;) --Super congrats on your beautiful romantic poem, Kim :D

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/29/2011 4:39:00 AM

Romance isn't dead, Love it Congratulations Kim x

David Williams

Date: 12/29/2011 3:09:00 AM

Kim congrats on your win, a beautiful Kimo, very romantic, thanks for entering..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2011 8:58:00 PM

I really like how you did this. VERY good work, Kim. I hope you soar on the chart!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2011 4:52:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/26/2011 9:55:00 AM

How wonderful romance it is! Loved it the heartbeat. Wish you all the best. Thanks for your comment on my write. bl

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/25/2011 9:42:00 PM

Sweet set of four kimos here, Kim. Each one delivers a great romantic message.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/25/2011 8:02:00 PM

A softly romantic verse for the contest Kim, I wish you well and a whole new year of great writing! Luv, Lizzie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 11:35:00 AM

Good morning Kim, Now that the presents are wrapped, the stockings all hung, all that's left now is the holiday fun! Merry Christmas! (Dr Seuss) , wishing you the best this coming year.. love the slight romantic fun in this contest... fairy tales,, do they really come true? Good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2011 11:14:00 AM

Love it Kim...........threr´s only you,me,No one,nothing else exists." - romantic!!!! OXOX hugs from Anne-Lise