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Romantic Charm In Four Lines

My love, you are a road that winds behind green hills. I'm led to new delights. . . your secret rills. My love, you are a letter penned with passion's gust. I read your eyes and see the soul I trust. Feb. 13, 2018 For Silent One's Romantic Charm in Four Lines Contest

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Marc Acrich

Date: 3/21/2018 12:05:00 PM

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/19/2018 2:19:00 PM

Nice one Andrea. love phyl

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2018 3:05:00 PM

Back with congrats on your fine win, Andrea.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/17/2018 7:07:00 AM

I love this. Love, love, love, love this poem. Oh how I would love to possess your talent even for just a day. A Fav. A huge fan, armand.

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/15/2018 10:09:00 PM

Andrea, Still a winner in my book! For me, it was a joy being on the podium with such a talented group of poets. Congratulations on your placement too... Mick

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/15/2018 8:03:00 PM

Congrats on an awesome win for an romantic, sweet and charming poem Andrea!~Che :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/15/2018 10:06:00 AM

That is plain 'loverly' - truly. I blinked and missed this contest! I see you fared well among all the placements, crazy, aint it? I love this just as it is, contest or no, it is most romantic. Love ... CayCay

Joseph May

Date: 2/15/2018 7:13:00 AM

Beautiful romantic lines Andrea....Congrats on your win!

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/14/2018 12:41:00 PM

Very beautiful! A lot love in few words.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2018 12:01:00 PM

- Congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/14/2018 11:01:00 AM

A short but beautiful romantic poem. I wish you well!

Gary Smith

Date: 2/14/2018 9:35:00 AM

A lovely poem Andrea, congrats :)

James Horn

Date: 2/14/2018 9:27:00 AM

While our car swerves and swerves, You always like looking at my curves, And when the wind had many gusts; Kept blowing on my beautiful busts. When my many poems I did compile, None of them were ever worthwhile; And even when I went to an academy, I had flunked a course in anatomy. When you see my poetry's framework, You know it was written by big jerk; Could be considered contiguious; Mine were really already ambiguious.

Silent One

Date: 2/14/2018 8:55:00 AM

so sweet Andrea, it is so nice to see this romantic side of your..Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 2/14/2018 7:09:00 AM

"I read your eyes and see the soul I trust" sooooo deep, this was very satisfying to read, Andrea. Thank you for showing us this beauty.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/14/2018 1:55:00 AM

- Lovely, for your husband Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/14/2018 12:04:00 AM

Wow... Fantastic lines Andrea... Good luck in the contest...

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/13/2018 9:44:00 PM

I love it, Andrea. Beautiful poem of true and deep love.

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/13/2018 9:29:00 PM

Andrea, Yes, a winner indeed! The eyes have it... Best of luck... Mick

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/13/2018 9:18:00 PM

WoW! Andrea, You rose to the challenge and nailed it. I found each line romantic and charming. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis