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Romantic Charm In 4 Lines - Waterfalls Flow In Your Majesty

In your absence the ink thirsts in barren land,
in your presence it sings like nightingales.
Like waterfalls it flows in your majesty,
drifting to a bridge connecting our hearts.

Silent One
13 February 2018

Example for Romantic charm in 4 lines

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March 3, 2018 at 11:05 PM

Beautiful romantic poem, done well. Good luck if for contest. Loved always, bl

Phyllis Babcock

February 27, 2018 at 2:16 PM

So well written these romantic pieces. Love the four pieces. love phyl

Joseph P. DiMino

February 27, 2018 at 5:08 AM

Beautifully said, Si; I could not imagine being in love and not wanting to write about it; in fact, sing to the world. Love the imagery and great flow.

February 27, 2018 at 6:33 AM

Thank you.

February 24, 2018 at 11:16 AM

Oh just breathtaking Silent One.. Deeply poetic and romantic expressed in lush and exquisite imagery..

February 27, 2018 at 6:33 AM

Thank you.

February 14, 2018 at 12:52 PM

That is truly romantic, S-1, especially the opening and closing lines! Regards // paul

February 14, 2018 at 4:29 PM

Thank you..

Demetrios Trifiatis

February 14, 2018 at 7:06 AM

Touchingly romantic dear, S,O. Enjoy the day!

February 14, 2018 at 4:29 PM

Thank you..

February 14, 2018 at 2:21 AM

Hello again, you mentioned romance, most might assume romance with a person because of your contest, but I get more of a feeling the romance is with your muse. I guess it's perfect if your muse is a person. If I had to pick a line I really relate to, it would probably be the third. There is a true happiness I feel when the words just come flowing out like a waterfall.

February 14, 2018 at 4:30 PM

The poem is about not writing when the beloved is not there.. Thank you for your visit Jeannie..

February 13, 2018 at 9:01 PM

WoW! Silent, This is a good example for your contest. These four lines are very romantic:-) Alexis

February 14, 2018 at 4:30 PM

Thank you.

February 13, 2018 at 8:36 PM

"...the ink thirsts"! Wow! How totally poetic can you get? lol Just wonderful, ZZ. All of them are wonderful. I couldn't make up my mind which one is my favorite so I "favorited them all! :)

February 14, 2018 at 4:32 PM

Thank you for your kind words Carole...

February 13, 2018 at 7:57 PM

You know what? All four are my favourites. Heaven Sent....Maria

February 14, 2018 at 4:32 PM

Thank you Maria..

Andrea Dietrich

February 13, 2018 at 5:47 PM

You know what? I think this one is my favorite of the four!!

February 13, 2018 at 5:49 PM

I am glad you liked it.. Thank you Andrea..

February 13, 2018 at 5:05 PM

Simply beautiful! Can't wait for tomorrow poem :)

February 13, 2018 at 5:06 PM

Thank you Kina, will see if I will write a new one or maybe be lazy and post an old one...

February 13, 2018 at 4:44 PM

So, you need to be with her to be inspired? That is romantic.

February 13, 2018 at 4:46 PM

The pen always flows in the presence of the beloved.. Thank you Jean..

February 13, 2018 at 4:09 PM

Another lovely write Silent...I like the first line best :)

February 13, 2018 at 4:46 PM

Thank you Chris..

Constance La France

February 13, 2018 at 3:18 PM

Silent, lovely and a great example for your contest

February 13, 2018 at 4:47 PM

Thank you..

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 13, 2018 at 1:48 PM

- Beautiful charm, S.O. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

February 13, 2018 at 2:42 PM

Thank you..

February 13, 2018 at 1:27 PM

An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart, as your words transport us with their beauty to the magic realm of two hearts in love, Emile.

February 13, 2018 at 2:42 PM

Thank you Emile..

February 13, 2018 at 12:45 PM

what a great example of what can be said in four lines, looks easy but it's not, Very romantic SO!!

February 13, 2018 at 2:43 PM

Thank you Mike, I thought this one was probably the weakest of the four examples.. but it seems to have the most comments..

Alfred Berggren

February 13, 2018 at 11:14 AM

A great poem only matched by a great accompanying picture.

February 13, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Thank you Alfred...

February 13, 2018 at 8:36 AM

Such a clever use of words, metaphorical ink yet again - especially in that first line. Romantic charm indeed. The visual compliments without distracting - too much!

February 13, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Thank you for your kind feedback Emma..

February 13, 2018 at 8:01 AM

I see you made Judith overly excited... better slow down a bit!!!

February 13, 2018 at 8:09 AM

Judith get excited very easily Jack... lol.. thanks.

February 13, 2018 at 7:57 AM

My GOSH Silent One!! Just beautiful!

February 13, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Thanks..

February 13, 2018 at 6:46 AM

So cute.... Loved it... Great example...

February 13, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Thanks..

February 13, 2018 at 6:17 AM

Definitely sweet and charming, Silent One!

February 13, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Thanks..

February 13, 2018 at 5:41 AM

Nice example indeed...I really admire you...You keep the love flowing through and through...All the best SO

February 13, 2018 at 5:57 AM

Thank you Arturo, I think this is a form you can do very well in..

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