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Romantic Charm In 4 Lines - Metaphor For Perfection

 Life is silent, until I hear your voice.
You are the metaphor for perfection.
Your charismatic aura enchants me,
releasing emotions I cannot explain. 

Silent One
13 February 2018

Example for Romantic charm in 4 lines contest.

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Phyllis Babcock Date: 2/27/2018 1:59:00 PM Can so relate to the words of this poem.love phyl Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 2/24/2018 11:30:00 AM Your first line is poetic bliss, Silent One, and your poem is so expressive of love and romantic appreciation.. A beauty! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/22/2018 3:30:00 PM ahh, another four liner I had failed to see. You are a charmer with the four liner charm poems!! Login to Reply

Carole Duet Date: 2/13/2018 8:20:00 PM The 1st line of this poem is just beau-U-ti-ful. And I love "charismatic aura". Love the whole thing in fact. Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/14/2018 4:46:00 PM Thank you Carole..

Becca Teagan Date: 2/13/2018 6:07:00 PM I think this one is my favorite. It literally swept me off my feet heh but I'm a klutz so Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/14/2018 4:46:00 PM Hope you didnt hurt yourself... Thanks Becca..

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/13/2018 5:45:00 PM I really like this, but I think I preferred the rhymed one more! Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 5:47:00 PM Thank you.. I think many do..

Akkina Downing Date: 2/13/2018 4:50:00 PM Enchanting my dear... I love it! Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 5:47:00 PM Thank you..

Jean Murray Date: 2/13/2018 4:47:00 PM If I have to pick, then it's second one down. Those chocolate brown. Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 4:51:00 PM Thank you Jean...

Constance La France Date: 2/13/2018 3:21:00 PM Silent, I love this one of all your examples for your contest, this is so magical ! Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 4:51:00 PM Thank you BW...

Mick Talbot Date: 2/13/2018 2:45:00 PM Wow, wow, wow, wow! Your words swept me off my feet, you wondrous charmer, and how! One day, perhaps? We'll meet? Four lines of gratitude, from my heart exude! En cor my virtual friend, your words, doth hate transcend! Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 2:46:00 PM Thank you Mike, nice that they charm the ladies and the men lol..

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/13/2018 1:54:00 PM - 4 wonderful examples, S.O. ... love all of them :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 2:48:00 PM Thank you for reading all of the Anne Lise... I appreciate it..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 2/13/2018 8:43:00 AM This is splendid! Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 11:29:00 AM ta...

Judith S Date: 2/13/2018 8:01:00 AM Romance personified!! Amazing S.O. Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 11:29:00 AM Thanks..

Jack Ellison Date: 2/13/2018 7:55:00 AM FABULOUS!!!! 4 lines of pure unadulterated love!!!!! I'm gleaming... Happy Jack xx Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 11:29:00 AM Thank you Jack.. Nice to see you..

Tom Cunningham Date: 2/13/2018 7:28:00 AM Just read your all your romantic charms.Brilliantly done,you are a true romantic, they will take some beating that's for sure. Regards Tom Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 11:29:00 AM Thank you Tom, this one seems like a favourite for many..

Supraja Kannan Date: 2/13/2018 6:48:00 AM Beautiful... Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 2:48:00 PM Thanks..

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/13/2018 6:21:00 AM Enchanting! Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 2:48:00 PM Thanks..

Arturo Michael Date: 2/13/2018 5:48:00 AM You're right...It's truly unexplainable...but knowing... Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 6:00:00 AM Thanks for reading all of the Arturo, appreciate it..

Maria Williams Date: 2/13/2018 5:40:00 AM I've always felt that you excel in Free Verse Si, your strongest form of poetry. Another beautiful poem of yours. I love it and by far my favorite of the four....Maria Login to Reply Silent One Date: 2/13/2018 6:00:00 AM Thank you Maria, this one took me a bit longer than the others.. Just could not get it right..