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Life is silent, until I hear your voice. You are the metaphor for perfection. Your charismatic aura enchants me, releasing emotions I cannot explain. Silent One 13 February 2018 Example for Romantic charm in 4 lines contest.

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/27/2018 1:59:00 PM

Can so relate to the words of this poem.love phyl

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/24/2018 11:30:00 AM

Your first line is poetic bliss, Silent One, and your poem is so expressive of love and romantic appreciation.. A beauty!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2018 3:30:00 PM

ahh, another four liner I had failed to see. You are a charmer with the four liner charm poems!!

Carole Duet

Date: 2/13/2018 8:20:00 PM

The 1st line of this poem is just beau-U-ti-ful. And I love "charismatic aura". Love the whole thing in fact.

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:46:00 PM

Thank you Carole..

Becca Teagan

Date: 2/13/2018 6:07:00 PM

I think this one is my favorite. It literally swept me off my feet heh but I'm a klutz so

Silent One
Date: 2/14/2018 4:46:00 PM

Hope you didnt hurt yourself... Thanks Becca..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2018 5:45:00 PM

I really like this, but I think I preferred the rhymed one more!

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 5:47:00 PM

Thank you.. I think many do..

Akkina Downing

Date: 2/13/2018 4:50:00 PM

Enchanting my dear... I love it!

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 5:47:00 PM

Thank you..

Jean Murray

Date: 2/13/2018 4:47:00 PM

If I have to pick, then it's second one down. Those chocolate brown.

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:51:00 PM

Thank you Jean...

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2018 3:21:00 PM

Silent, I love this one of all your examples for your contest, this is so magical !

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 4:51:00 PM

Thank you BW...

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/13/2018 2:45:00 PM

Wow, wow, wow, wow! Your words swept me off my feet, you wondrous charmer, and how! One day, perhaps? We'll meet? Four lines of gratitude, from my heart exude! En cor my virtual friend, your words, doth hate transcend!

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 2:46:00 PM

Thank you Mike, nice that they charm the ladies and the men lol..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2018 1:54:00 PM

- 4 wonderful examples, S.O. ... love all of them :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 2:48:00 PM

Thank you for reading all of the Anne Lise... I appreciate it..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/13/2018 8:43:00 AM

This is splendid!

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:29:00 AM

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Judith S

Date: 2/13/2018 8:01:00 AM

Romance personified!! Amazing S.O.

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:29:00 AM

Thanks..

Jack Ellison

Date: 2/13/2018 7:55:00 AM

FABULOUS!!!! 4 lines of pure unadulterated love!!!!! I'm gleaming... Happy Jack xx

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:29:00 AM

Thank you Jack.. Nice to see you..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/13/2018 7:28:00 AM

Just read your all your romantic charms.Brilliantly done,you are a true romantic, they will take some beating that's for sure. Regards Tom

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 11:29:00 AM

Thank you Tom, this one seems like a favourite for many..

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/13/2018 6:48:00 AM

Beautiful...

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 2:48:00 PM

Thanks..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/13/2018 6:21:00 AM

Enchanting!

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 2:48:00 PM

Thanks..

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/13/2018 5:48:00 AM

You're right...It's truly unexplainable...but knowing...

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 6:00:00 AM

Thanks for reading all of the Arturo, appreciate it..

Maria Williams

Date: 2/13/2018 5:40:00 AM

I've always felt that you excel in Free Verse Si, your strongest form of poetry. Another beautiful poem of yours. I love it and by far my favorite of the four....Maria

Silent One
Date: 2/13/2018 6:00:00 AM

Thank you Maria, this one took me a bit longer than the others.. Just could not get it right..