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Romantic Charm In 4 Lines - Love Story

Romantic Charm in 4 Lines - LOVE STORY "When your eyes look into mine I see a Love Story dancing in perfect time My reflection holding yours Twin mirrors golden keys that open hearts’ doors" (Lovejoy-Burton/Feb 2018)

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Susan Ashley

Date: 2/17/2018 10:54:00 AM

A beautiful and sensual poem of scintillating love Leanne. Each romantic line speaks to love's dance through the dimensions of time. Very elegantly amorous. The video clip is exquisite as well. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/17/2018 3:21:00 PM

Thanks Susan, I think I need to take dancing lessons...

John Hamilton

Date: 2/17/2018 10:05:00 AM

Nice, nice, nice, twin mirrors...nice, did I tell you this is ....nice? Loved it!!

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/17/2018 3:21:00 PM

I can be nice occasionally.

John Hamilton
Date: 2/17/2018 1:50:00 PM

Ha!!

Maria Williams

Date: 2/15/2018 2:38:00 AM

Love and Romance keeps the world spinning Leanne. "I see a Love Story dancing in perfect time"..Love that. Would have been great for the Contest? Why didn't you enter?....Maria

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/15/2018 3:12:00 AM

I love Silent's idea for a competition, but I chose not to enter, maybe because in my mind, Love isn't about competing. I was happy just to write about Love, it's the best thing to write about next to a 'good' Life. x

Silent One

Date: 2/14/2018 12:39:00 PM

Very romantic, a shame you did not enter..

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/14/2018 4:51:00 PM

Ah well....Happy Valentines to you and yours.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Date: 2/13/2018 7:09:00 PM

https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/50507/i-loved-you-first-but-afterwards-your-love

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/14/2018 4:59:00 PM

Deep mind that lady....

Frederic Parker
Date: 2/13/2018 9:36:00 PM

this poem by Christina Rossetti was like a golden thread weaving through the fabric of my mind creating a warm cloth to stay from the cold of my own inadequate writing...thank you Leanne for exposing me to this poet and this poem

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/13/2018 10:56:00 AM

as though the space of time disappears to wanton needs a lover's heart hears to turn and kiss to hold ever warm the fiery eyes that flash where passion's form

Frederic Parker
Date: 2/13/2018 5:50:00 PM

as for my muse...I'm the lucky one...

Frederic Parker
Date: 2/13/2018 5:48:00 PM

thank you dear poet and happy valentine to you and yours...actually, your 4 line poem invited me to a poetic dance so I added 4 more lines caused by the reading of yours...it was a bow to your art poet... like two violins...hope you didn't mind...that's the 2nd time you've asked if my words are my words....they are unless I've lived before my friend

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/13/2018 4:13:00 PM

Very Shakespearean and romantic...lucky muse you have there on your arm. I was wondering if these were your words, so as I'm want to I googled (-) (-)...instead I discovered this poem by Keats titled "Imitation of Spencer", such a beautiful way he has with words in that poem. And so to yours Frederic. Happy Valentines to you and your muse.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/13/2018 8:44:00 AM

Lovely love filled ink Leanne <3

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 2/13/2018 4:08:00 PM

Happy Valentines M.McGreavy. x