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Romantic - Acrostic

Resurrected love Overpowers the pagan lusts, Mitigates marauding insatiability, Arousing within the valiant vixen Nocturnal nuances to trap the moon, Titillating a horizons distant need Inciting the oarsmen in orgasmic rhythm Cloth rippling in passion’s wind. ©2/16/2018 submitted to - Romantic-Acrostic – Poetry Contest sponsor – John Hamilton

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/22/2018 5:29:00 AM

Personally I'd love to have seen this place much higher John, many congratulations on you win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2018 11:46:00 AM

wow the imagery toward the end was so amazing. As always,you rose to the occasion with a unique entry! Love it.

John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2018 8:03:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, high praise from one of my favorite soup poets.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/18/2018 2:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win, John.

John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2018 8:02:00 PM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your taking time to read and comment

John Hamilton

Date: 2/18/2018 1:42:00 PM

Quite the passionate write John, congrats on a fine placement!

John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2018 8:00:00 PM

Thanks John, I find the Acrostic form very challenging so I am doubly pleased by the placement. Appreciate your taking the time and effort to sponsor the contest

Jan Allison

Date: 2/16/2018 3:59:00 PM

Phwoar John this is hot hot hot and brimming with passion. Great use of alliteration :-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2018 7:58:00 PM

Thanks Jan, the muse needed a cold shower after this write.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/16/2018 2:45:00 PM

- Both rhythm and passion, John - Beautifully written - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2018 7:57:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise, I'm a little late responding to comments been chasing my 3yr old and 9 mo old grand kids around