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Romancing the Rose

They carry me in naked upon their shoulders and toss me boisterously on our flower-bedecked nuptial bed. There is a sweet, musky aroma, mixed with an intense fragrance pervading our honeymoon suite. I look around the room Illuminated by the sensuous glow of a myriad candles. She lies there under a flower-festooned canopy covered from head to toe with rose petals. Lying softly beside her, I gently pick a petal from her each eye-- She opens her eyes and looks at me alluringly; With a trembling hand I pick another petal from upon her lips-- She gives me a sly smile; Softly I blow away the quivering petals from her ample bosom. Further down I hastily pluck another petal, I swoon enraptured… She's wearing nothing but a rose petal dress. ~Romantic poem contest by Poet Destroyer A

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Date: 12/29/2014 2:03:00 PM
Qui qui. Romantic poem. Congratulations on your win Abdul
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Date: 12/26/2014 10:33:00 PM
ABDUL, CONGRATS ON THE AWESOME TOP WIN... LINDA
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Date: 12/20/2014 5:03:00 AM
Lovely title and lovely read, congratulations on the win, Abdul
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Date: 12/19/2014 6:13:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats it was lovely to read this again:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/19/2014 3:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Abdul, beautifully written. Blessings and Merry Christmas to you and yours
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Date: 12/17/2014 12:38:00 PM
ohhh, you penned this so well.. mysteriously engaging, abdul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/17/2014 12:41:00 PM
Thanks nette, appreciate much.
Date: 12/16/2014 4:34:00 PM
wow a rose petal dress how divine - beautiful write love the unique take on the theme good luck:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/17/2014 12:42:00 PM
Yeah! It took me by surprise too...I mean, the rose petal dress!!!

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