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ROMANCE She played Chopin And played it wonderfully well. She would be quite beautiful - Young, vivacious - I could tell From my window I could see her, Though only her dark, flowing hair. There was a violin on the piano. Another musician there? I yearned to see her face, To complete the lovely sound with vision. I would gather courage, go next door, Knock – this my bold decision. When I rapped the music stopped. I waited, restless, eager to see The form, the face I could love so well, And hoped she’d (at least) like me When at last then my obsession appeared She was all I could ever hope for, Standing there, smiling, greeting This stranger at her door. I begged her pardon, but couldn’t resist the urge To see who was playing Chopin so well, That she truly must like the great Pole. She was disturbingly amused, I could tell. I was about to introduce myself When she declared, “I like Chopin just fine.” - Her tone of contempt forever dashed my ardor - “It was Romance, by Anton Rubinstein”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/2/2014 12:24:00 AM
Yes, Daver, you got it. Daydreams ARE rather self worshiping, arent they? But mostly our deep fantasies!!
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Date: 5/1/2014 6:00:00 PM
Gee don'cha just hate it when that happens..' well not that its ever happened to me, you see; I wonder who ole Rubinstein Is?? was..'' Oh whatever..' take care there Daver..'
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Date: 4/30/2014 6:35:00 PM
I've practiced this routine myself a few times. I think it was after one such event that I decided to pursue astronomy—to learn of black holes and of how I might fall into one. This has a very nice pace to it, and then the disarming end. Good job.
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Date: 4/29/2014 4:02:00 PM
enjoyed the well-paced unraveling of the scene, daver, and a surprise in the end to boot.. splendid work!.. huggs
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Date: 4/28/2014 6:42:00 PM
Hello there, Daver!!!
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Date: 4/28/2014 11:08:00 AM
Its as if you painted a scene from a movie...I love the imagery and flow of this exquisite poem. Thanks for the visit that led me to this lovely piece of art!
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Date: 4/28/2014 1:59:00 AM
This write my dear poetic friend truly was some what more comforting if you recall my hiding in the putrid barrel just to get a gander of the likes of a fine sweet flower from the distance ! *smiles* Great write Dave ! A blessed week to ya my friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:40:00 PM
Hi, Daver, glad to see you post your latest here. It is SO clever!!! Thanks for reading my poems today. Hope you are feeling well. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 4/27/2014 1:09:00 AM
Oh my goodness, who has not experienced such humiliation in this life, and we remember those moments with pronounced clarity we wish we could forget! I loved this charming romantic piece Daver.
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Date: 4/24/2014 4:35:00 PM
This is wonderful Daver.. It could be the start of a short story or novel.
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Date: 4/25/2014 10:10:00 AM
My novel writing days are over - too old now and bad eyes, but thanks. Love, daver
Date: 4/24/2014 1:47:00 PM
- A visit from an angel who loves playing Chopin - Romance .... yes, I believe - a beautiful poem Daver! - Thank you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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