Romance

ROMANCE

She played Chopin
And played it wonderfully well.
She would be quite beautiful -
Young, vivacious - I could tell

From my window I could see her,
Though only her dark, flowing hair.
There was a violin on the piano.
Another musician there?

I yearned to see her face,
To complete the lovely sound with vision.
I would gather courage, go next door,
Knock – this my bold decision.

When I rapped the music stopped.
I waited, restless, eager to see
The form, the face I could love so well,
And hoped she’d (at least) like me

When at last then my obsession appeared
She was all I could ever hope for,
Standing there, smiling, greeting
This stranger at her door. 

I begged her pardon, but couldn’t resist the urge
To see who was playing Chopin so well,
That she truly must like the great Pole.
She was disturbingly amused, I could tell.

I was about to introduce myself
When she declared, “I like Chopin just fine.” -
 Her tone of contempt forever dashed my ardor -
 “It was Romance, by Anton Rubinstein”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 12:24 AM
Yes, Daver, you got it. Daydreams ARE rather self worshiping, arent they? But mostly our deep fantasies!!
Maverick Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Gee don'cha just hate it when that happens..' well not that its ever happened to me, you see; I wonder who ole Rubinstein Is?? was..'' Oh whatever..' take care there Daver..'
Peterson Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 6:35 PM
I've practiced this routine myself a few times. I think it was after one such event that I decided to pursue astronomy—to learn of black holes and of how I might fall into one. This has a very nice pace to it, and then the disarming end. Good job.
Onclaud Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 4:02 PM
enjoyed the well-paced unraveling of the scene, daver, and a surprise in the end to boot.. splendid work!.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 6:42 PM
Hello there, Daver!!!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 11:08 AM
Its as if you painted a scene from a movie...I love the imagery and flow of this exquisite poem. Thanks for the visit that led me to this lovely piece of art!
Peranteau Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 1:59 AM
This write my dear poetic friend truly was some what more comforting if you recall my hiding in the putrid barrel just to get a gander of the likes of a fine sweet flower from the distance ! *smiles* Great write Dave ! A blessed week to ya my friend ! Much love, james
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Hi, Daver, glad to see you post your latest here. It is SO clever!!! Thanks for reading my poems today. Hope you are feeling well. Luv, Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 1:09 AM
Oh my goodness, who has not experienced such humiliation in this life, and we remember those moments with pronounced clarity we wish we could forget! I loved this charming romantic piece Daver.
Smith Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 4:35 PM
This is wonderful Daver.. It could be the start of a short story or novel.
Austin Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 10:10 AM
My novel writing days are over - too old now and bad eyes, but thanks. Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 1:47 PM
- A visit from an angel who loves playing Chopin - Romance .... yes, I believe - a beautiful poem Daver! - Thank you - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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