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Roller Coasters

Roller coaster rides, When in dreams, they’ll leave the track; Flying anywhere and back; To re-attach to, Their own track before you wake Up from the dreamscapes landscapes. No one can predict Where they will dare to take you; At least they’ll never drop and Break you like real ones. Dare to ride them in your dreams; Remember to watch all the Scenes, you’ll enter in, The dreams and learn to read their Messages that guide your life. Just for a fun ride a Coaster if, you want to see The thrills real ones provide.

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Date: 12/30/2018 7:04:00 PM
Such a creative write. I'm looking forward to such a dream! :) gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/1/2019 8:23:00 PM
Thanks Gershon and I hope you have a fantastic New Year!
Date: 12/28/2018 9:15:00 PM
I love a good dream, a fast-paced, throw me around, toss me into the air, and whirl me dream. Landing so fast back in my body I wake up with a giant GASP because my soul has re-entered too quickly. Thanks for the memories, M.L. I would like one of these again tonight.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/29/2018 7:34:00 AM
Aren't they fun? I especially love it when the colors are extra vibrant. Thanks.
Date: 12/28/2018 7:15:00 PM
I have very weird roller coasters as I sleep!! Good metaphor for dreams!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/29/2018 7:35:00 AM
Good point! Thanks Andrea.

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