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A rogue dentist called Freddie from the south
Brought misery to many a ones mouth
Caused his patients great pain
Done for profit and gain
Eventually their teeth all fell out.

Freddie was known as the dentist from hell
Gold implants at a high price he would sell
He was caught in a trap
Is now up on a rap 
Justice caught him and he's now in a cell.



Written on  9th January 2019

For limerick 11 poetry contest

Sponsored by Joseph May.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/14/2019 7:57:00 AM
Can't say my dentist is hellish, but ....oh well half my teeth are gone. Lovely limericks.
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Date: 1/14/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thanks L and D, don't worry, we all lose them eventually, too many sweets when we were young lol. Tom.
Date: 1/13/2019 6:37:00 AM
Lol loved this Tom you write these so well! Hugs Brenda;)
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Date: 1/13/2019 12:49:00 PM
Thank you Brenda, glad you liked it. Tom.
Date: 1/12/2019 12:39:00 PM
Gotta be careful with these dentists.. I have a lovely lady, who is mine.. You did well here with the constraints of the contest..
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Date: 1/12/2019 1:06:00 PM
Thanks S.O., must admit I never mind going to the dentist yet some dread it. Tom.
Date: 1/11/2019 2:15:00 PM
Awesome limerick, Tom! Had a great laugh thinking of a dentist selling gold fillings. Your rhyme is perfect and you adhered to the alphabetical requirement with ease. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 1/11/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Carolyn, a bit trickier having to keep it alphabetical took a bit longer than usual. Tom.
Date: 1/11/2019 4:30:00 AM
WoW! Tom, You rose to the challenge with this limerick hands down. Freddie got what he deserved. I bet he's wishing that he went by the book and not some greedy crook! It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/11/2019 7:19:00 AM
Thanks you Alexis, it wasn't an easy one to do that's for sure. Tom.
Date: 1/10/2019 7:48:00 PM
Nice Limerick as usual Tom You are so good at writing them. Can't trust a lot of these dentist. I avoid them. Good luck in the contest my friend...Peter
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Date: 1/11/2019 1:49:00 AM
A necessary evil sometimes and pricey lol
Date: 1/10/2019 5:47:00 PM
You did REALLY well with your set. Mine is not posted yet, but I am not terribly pleaed with it.
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Date: 1/11/2019 1:47:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, a lot harder keeping it alphabetical .
Date: 1/10/2019 4:17:00 PM
G'day Tom … a dentist causes so much double pain Tom. First it's the mouth and then the wallet, so I gather that a toothache is a legal form of blackmail - a great limerick Tom - Lindsay
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Date: 1/10/2019 4:29:00 PM
Thanks' Lindsay, haha the bill is more painful than the extraction
Date: 1/10/2019 1:20:00 PM
Tom I love great lims and this is a GREAT ONE! Great wit and creativity! Bob
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Date: 1/10/2019 2:46:00 PM
Thanks very much Robert, Tom.
Date: 1/10/2019 10:50:00 AM
knighting you as the master of lims, tom... great chuckles here!...huggs
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Date: 1/10/2019 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Nette, Do I get an allowance lol. Tom.
Date: 1/10/2019 8:55:00 AM
Hi Tom, you do the crime, you do the time. You have shown your creativity on the write for this contest. I get such a laugh out of all the limericks I read. I shall giggle all day now. Reads like a winner Tom. have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 1/10/2019 10:48:00 AM
Thank you very much Mike, glad it gave you a laugh. Enjoy the day too. Tom.
Date: 1/10/2019 8:37:00 AM
Perfect execution! ;) impessive! Best for a win! xomo
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Date: 1/10/2019 10:47:00 AM
Thank you very much Maureen. Tom.
Date: 1/10/2019 7:52:00 AM
Justice served. Well written Tom! :)
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Date: 1/10/2019 8:13:00 AM
Thanks very much Heidi. Tom.
Date: 1/10/2019 7:26:00 AM
He sure deserved the punishment..cleverly done with each line in sequence of alphabet. Best for a win, Tom.
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, no doubt he was kept busy inside lol. Tom
Date: 1/10/2019 7:26:00 AM
This is great, Tom You should write a book of Limericks, it would do well. Charlie
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Charlie, Even though I'm retired now I sometimes struggle to find time , food for thought though. Tom.
Date: 1/10/2019 7:24:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant Tom Freddie deserves to be locked up ! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/10/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I know many dread the dentist but its never bothered me, I just stare at his pics on the ceiling that he put their for the kids lol. Tom