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Winter was over, the snow melted fast, Fir, pines and cedars grew low near the ground, Now rarely a bout of rain would fall past. There beneath wet lush terrain, cones were found. Water fell below, becoming a rill. A water song running over harsh rocks, Jays and finches flying over the hill. Night Hutch and hawks flew overhead in flocks We stopped near a licenced large lake nearby, She knew her hobby and caught a large bass, Awesome were her eyes that lit like the sky. How lovely was the lake resembling glass! The fog high above dissipated fast, We went to a cabin to cook the fish Birds played around, eating tasty repast. So did we with wine and a tasty dish.

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Date: 10/30/2022 4:19:00 PM
I like this very much Victor. hugs, Linda
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Date: 10/27/2022 9:14:00 PM
Wow, this is so good, Victor, so visual...Harry
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Date: 10/27/2022 12:54:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work in these lines. I could feel the mountain air and excitement of the day. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/27/2022 9:58:00 AM
an idyllic scene and very nicely portrayed, Victor. Thanks for your recent comments to my poetry
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Date: 10/27/2022 8:08:00 AM
A lovely adventure for two you had that day, beautiful scenery and freshly caught fish to take away. Grand descriptive writing Victor… Belle
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Date: 10/26/2022 8:56:00 PM
What a lovely light-outing! I felt like coming along, too! Elizabeth
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Date: 10/26/2022 7:20:00 PM
Feel like joining you at this heavenly site. A mountain with a waterfall flowing into a rill and the wet ground where pines, fir and cedars grow with different kinds of birds flying about and the glassy lake close by.
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Date: 10/26/2022 6:47:00 PM
Victor, you painted a great scene of nature. Your poem makes me want to travel to The Rockies.
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Date: 10/26/2022 1:28:00 PM
Wow! Victor, You have penned such a well-written and descriptive write. I enjoy reading nature write. Your imagery is just gorgeous. Well done. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
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Date: 10/26/2022 12:06:00 PM
Victor, Your poetry includes some really vivid descriptions and metaphors. Excellent writing with such a fantastic and profound degree of insight and romantic scenes as well as wonderful rhyming.
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Date: 10/26/2022 10:49:00 AM
The rocky mountains is a beautiful location for such a perfect, romantic day. I love the peaceful, pleasant images of this verse. :)
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Date: 10/26/2022 9:56:00 AM
what a spectacular view both the image and your poem :)
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Date: 10/26/2022 10:07:00 AM
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Date: 10/26/2022 7:55:00 AM
Great imagery of nature, Victor, mmm the food sounds good. Many blessings my friend
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Date: 10/26/2022 7:37:00 AM
- Described so beautifully, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 10/26/2022 7:18:00 AM
Quite a romantic scene Victor, pure bliss. Tom
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Date: 10/26/2022 6:41:00 AM
Hello Victor. Wow, this is beyond lovely with grand imagery and moment in time. Truly. Now about that wine and tasty dish (smile). Have a beautiful night now and always. Love and Blessings always too.
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Date: 10/26/2022 5:33:00 AM
A lovely scene, my friend! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 10/26/2022 5:31:00 AM
Enjoyed the trip with you Victor. Splendid images you convey to bring forth the scenes to the reader.
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Date: 10/26/2022 4:46:00 AM
Not only is this beautiful with great imagery, Victor. But your rhyming is spot on! ...and you said you wished you can rhyme as good as I, don't be foolish...you've done so well in your poetry, now and in the past. Love this!
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Date: 10/26/2022 4:40:00 AM
Really like this one Victor about lovely nature and great rhyming…..Cuddles and cuddles! Debx
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Date: 10/26/2022 3:20:00 AM
Jóia de texto, great , salute alkas
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