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Rocky Mountains

Winter was over, the snow melted fast,
Fir, pines and cedars grew low near the ground,
Now rarely a bout of rain would fall past.
There beneath wet lush terrain, cones were found.

Water fell below, becoming a rill.
A water song running over harsh rocks,
Jays and finches flying over the hill.
Night Hutch and hawks flew overhead in flocks

We stopped near a licenced large lake nearby,
She knew her hobby and caught a large bass,
Awesome were her eyes that lit like the sky.
How lovely was the lake resembling glass!

The fog high above dissipated fast,
We went to a cabin to cook the fish
Birds played around, eating tasty repast.
So did we with wine and a tasty dish.
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Fowler Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 4:19 PM
I like this very much Victor. hugs, Linda
Horsman Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 9:14 PM
Wow, this is so good, Victor, so visual...Harry
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work in these lines. I could feel the mountain air and excitement of the day. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 9:58 AM
an idyllic scene and very nicely portrayed, Victor. Thanks for your recent comments to my poetry
Edmonds  Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 8:08 AM
A lovely adventure for two you had that day, beautiful scenery and freshly caught fish to take away. Grand descriptive writing Victor… Belle
Mccann Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:56 PM
What a lovely light-outing! I felt like coming along, too! Elizabeth
George Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 7:20 PM
Feel like joining you at this heavenly site. A mountain with a waterfall flowing into a rill and the wet ground where pines, fir and cedars grow with different kinds of birds flying about and the glassy lake close by.
Bayles Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:47 PM
Victor, you painted a great scene of nature. Your poem makes me want to travel to The Rockies.
Y. Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 1:28 PM
Wow! Victor, You have penned such a well-written and descriptive write. I enjoy reading nature write. Your imagery is just gorgeous. Well done. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
Poet Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:06 PM
Victor, Your poetry includes some really vivid descriptions and metaphors. Excellent writing with such a fantastic and profound degree of insight and romantic scenes as well as wonderful rhyming.
Buehler Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 10:49 AM
The rocky mountains is a beautiful location for such a perfect, romantic day. I love the peaceful, pleasant images of this verse. :)
Rose  Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:56 AM
what a spectacular view both the image and your poem :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 10:07 AM
xx
Roper Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 7:55 AM
Great imagery of nature, Victor, mmm the food sounds good. Many blessings my friend
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 7:37 AM
- Described so beautifully, Victor :) - hugs
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Quite a romantic scene Victor, pure bliss. Tom
Ricci Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:41 AM
Hello Victor. Wow, this is beyond lovely with grand imagery and moment in time. Truly. Now about that wine and tasty dish (smile). Have a beautiful night now and always. Love and Blessings always too.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 5:33 AM
A lovely scene, my friend! Hugs ~ Kim
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 5:31 AM
Enjoyed the trip with you Victor. Splendid images you convey to bring forth the scenes to the reader.
Messina Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Not only is this beautiful with great imagery, Victor. But your rhyming is spot on! ...and you said you wished you can rhyme as good as I, don't be foolish...you've done so well in your poetry, now and in the past. Love this!
M  Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 4:40 AM
Really like this one Victor about lovely nature and great rhyming…..Cuddles and cuddles! Debx
Poetry Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 3:20 AM
Jóia de texto, great , salute alkas
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