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Rock-Paper-Scissors

ROCK-PAPER-SCISSORS
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on scorching sun with scissors of red ray
kids waded paper boats down winding bay
     huge rock slammed their course
      sails flat, with full force!
so rock/paper/scissors bets winged a tricky play
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although the rushed pace was like wrestling
and left their fists flushed red and sweating,
     best of  four rounds caused seizures
     playmates hid crazed wrist fissures
hours after, hungry tummies stopped pretending





P.D’s Rock/ Paper/ Scissors
By nette onclaud

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2011

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Gautami Phookan Date: 6/18/2011 12:04:00 PM These have been amazingly done, brilliant work nette!! Congrats on your win dear..love to you, gautami Login to Reply

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet Date: 6/17/2011 1:41:00 PM Oh nette how delightful this is.Thanks for the wonderful comment on Clint and yes but did I enter it.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 6/17/2011 11:31:00 AM Many congrats on your wins in 'Scissors' and 'Sonnets', Nette : ) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/17/2011 11:28:00 AM Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/17/2011 7:14:00 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., nette Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/17/2011 4:43:00 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/16/2011 6:05:00 PM Thank you for entering in my contest Nette, enjoyed you entry, congrats on your win:),..p.d. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/16/2011 5:44:00 PM Nice work, Nette. Congrats on your success in PD's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/16/2011 5:14:00 PM Congrats Nette luv on your HM in PD's cool contest with this cool entry ..sorry I did not get to read it before time.. apologize please.. very very busy these days..till the dust settles with this new home it will be this way ..sorry my friend.. congrats on the HM for excellence luv.. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 6/15/2011 1:36:00 PM Have played this game many times, but not with this amount of imagination. Good luck in contest. Love. daver Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/15/2011 12:50:00 PM super entry luv.. am only on for a split second..much going on today and tonight..explain later.. just posting an entry for Rick's contest and then off again..work on your Zodiac Zone tomorrow if possible.. in process of packing and moving .. oh long story .. catch u later my friend.. good luck in PD's cool contest.. a winner for sure.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/15/2011 11:31:00 AM We have so many amazing writers here at PoetrySoup and I enjoy reading all the poems. I am happy your poetry was among the poems I was able to read today Nette. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/15/2011 6:30:00 AM Wonderful take with this poem for the contest, nette, best of luck and thanks so much for my 2nd place in your Jeans contest, I am so honored~~ Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/15/2011 6:28:00 AM Interesting one..Great story in poetic form..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me ..Thanks for the selection of my work as the honored second place in your contest..I know that it is not easy choosing the best of those great ones entered..Sara Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 6/15/2011 4:41:00 AM So glad to find time and read 'you' once again,dear friend,lovely post! Login to Reply

Jodie Williams Date: 6/15/2011 2:16:00 AM i really like this nette, but then i always enjoy your pieces best best wishes in the contest :) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 6/15/2011 12:40:00 AM Wonderful Limericks here Nette...Best wishes...come. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 6/14/2011 10:16:00 PM Good luck with your limericks. A great job. Thank you for my 2nd place in your contest. My daddy would be surprised to find his old overalls among these beloved blue jeans. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 6/14/2011 8:49:00 PM really enjoyed reading this one Nette, good luck in contest. thank you for reading and commenting on Heavens's Delight. Login to Reply

Mourning Mist Date: 6/14/2011 6:36:00 PM fissures and fours do not rhyme..just to let you know, at least up here..no idea if you have an accent redm bay and play work, course and force...wrestling and sweating do not really rhyme well either..sweating rhymes with petting, setting, getting,letting, etc.. Login to Reply Nette Onclaud Date: 6/15/2011 6:56:00 AM oh mist, how about internal rhymes? :) Nette Onclaud Date: 6/14/2011 6:45:00 PM hope you've read or heard of end rhymes, dear... i stand by my work.. thanks for the concern, mist..;) huggs!