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Robin In the Dawn

The robin hops across the lawn She stops in stillness and she stares I see her at the break of dawn The robin hops across the lawn She quickly flies and then she’s gone She watches her nest with sweet care The robin hops across the lawn She stops in stillness and she stares Heidi Sands 8/23/17

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Roy Pett

Date: 8/24/2017 10:20:00 AM

Brilliant Triolet Heidi, I love to see and hear the chattering of a robin, well written. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 10:24:00 AM

Thank you. That is the first Triolet I tried to do. I love seeing the Robin. They visit me here and I watch them bounce around, etc :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/23/2017 5:14:00 PM

Theyre so pretty and captivating to watch, Heidi.:) Very nice Triolet!Be blessed!:) D

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 6:29:00 PM

Yes, I love to watch them Dorian. Thank you ! :)

Barry Stebbings

Date: 8/23/2017 3:16:00 PM

Cute, I like the Triolet form. Beautiful observations in this piece. // Barry.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 3:39:00 PM

Thank you Barry. I have never done one before. It is fun :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/23/2017 2:43:00 PM

Hi Heidi, You created a beautiful picture with words. I could see it all in my head. This is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/23/2017 6:15:00 PM

Oh I thought you wrote it for a contest. Nevertheless it's lovely:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2017 3:38:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. I didn't write it for a contest. I appreciate your comment :)