Roaming the Sky

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" CHASED CLOUDS " MY PHOTO, ©

Image may contain: cloud, sky, outdoor and nature

Chased by the playful winds

frightened clouds are roaming the sky


while


the blooming fields are watching them

as they hurriedly pass by!  









© Demetrios Trifiatis
      21 March 2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/22/2020 8:20:00 AM

A personified delicacy!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/22/2020 3:01:00 PM

Thank you Caren. Xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/21/2020 3:34:00 PM

Sweet... loved this whimsical piece.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/21/2020 6:07:00 PM

As long as you find it sweet, I am happy dearest, Eileen. A bear's hug xxx

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/21/2020 1:35:00 PM

wonderful visual through your words my friend... love the scene you created! hugs XoXo

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/21/2020 1:47:00 PM

I was just commenting on your wonderful sad poem dearest, Sandra. Thank you. Hugs xxx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/21/2020 7:33:00 AM

You captured that photo in your words, Demetrios--beautiful poetry my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/21/2020 8:28:00 AM

The truth is first I took the photo then fitted the words to it. Glad you like it my dear friend, Vijay.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/21/2020 6:53:00 AM

A Ray of sunshine in these dark times Demetrios, A very uplifting scene you've given us. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/21/2020 8:26:00 AM

I was on the terrace of my house observing the clouds on the sky and took the photo then wrote the poem. Yes, we need to look up high in order to see a better day. Blessings my friend.