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Road Map I know where I have been. I wish that sometimes... I could just forget. But I can not. I know where I am. I wish that it was a better place, but there is still time to work, on that. Being brave about reality, is the first step toward winning, the unseen war. I know where I want to be. The finest point, the sharpest dot... on the page. It is close, and I can almost... breathe it in. But not. Instead, I write it down, and try to capture elusive ideas, about tomorrow, that can only be seen otherwise... in dreams.

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Date: 6/15/2021 10:43:00 AM
Read it more than once, wonderfully penned! I could relate to this poem. Guess many can but to write it the way you expressed is not easy. You are a great poet.
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Ann Foster
Date: 6/15/2021 10:54:00 AM
You are sweet. You make me want to write again and again... Blessings on you and those you love. Ann
Date: 6/15/2021 2:21:00 AM
Experiential. Great.
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Date: 6/15/2021 7:20:00 AM
:) I love cool words... Ann
Date: 6/14/2021 9:07:00 PM
I have felt this way many times! Great job putting it into words!
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Ann Foster
Date: 6/15/2021 7:20:00 AM
You were missed. Thank you for your kind words. Ann
Date: 6/14/2021 4:29:00 PM
Wonderful poem. You've captured the angst we all feel. Will tomorrow be better than today? Who knows. Make good decisions and let the chips fall where they may. Stay well my friend.
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Ann Foster
Date: 6/14/2021 7:45:00 PM
You are ever so kind... have the very nicest day... Ann

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