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R.M.+p.S. 4-Ever

Carvings in a tree, A heart with an I love you; Lover’s initials.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 11:26:00 PM

You bring everything to poetrysoup. Nice job. Tyler

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/16/2009 7:33:00 PM

THAT WAS A GREAT POEM AND A PRETTY POEM RAUL...........................DANIELLE

Jay Loveless

Date: 3/7/2009 4:18:00 AM

-smiles- nice job. I cant wait to see the second half of those initials for me today xD. Very cute.

Arany P.

Date: 3/5/2009 6:51:00 AM

short forms... get you very expressive... good one! and thank you... ~ Arany

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/4/2009 9:18:00 PM

Perfectly beautiful and very clever Seryu, Raul! Love the title! Love, Robin

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/4/2009 7:35:00 PM

Very craetive to express such a heartfelt pieace. love E.

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/4/2009 2:29:00 PM

Nice work describing old times. DN

Date: 3/4/2009 8:43:00 AM

Oh, I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this one. Thanks for allowing me to smile with your words. Young love--gotta' love it. Have a good day. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/4/2009 7:08:00 AM

Oh so sweet.....Love this!! ~ :) Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/4/2009 6:03:00 AM

Aha! So, you are a true romantic indeed. Clever and excellent Senryu! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 3/4/2009 12:28:00 AM

Nice work Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/3/2009 7:02:00 PM

Dear Raul, Very deep Love Expressed I hope it was a young tree so it speaks for many generations Excellent Write Thank-YOU for your concern over my recent illness and YOUR gracious comments LOVE YOUr POETRY...HG

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/3/2009 6:59:00 PM

Whoa,,,back in da day lol sweet memories Raul.

Sandra Hudson

Date: 3/3/2009 6:04:00 PM

Right back attcha...I like this one alot. This took a lot of thought. I never had anyone write my intials in a tree. gee....now I've missed something. lol-Always Alexandra