River's Edge

Our fishing guide thought I wanted to catch fish –
that I had come to the River’s Edge to catch
a mottled Brown for a mantled photograph.

I should have told him that I cared not for a fish
for my father had recently passed away 
and I held his rod of beautiful bamboo.

I had come only to cast into my memory’s mist –
to hear the line sing my father’s song
and again his voice arise from a riffle.

Many mornings he held my hand to teach me
to find the rhythm of the line then extend 
to mirror and become the water.

From a rock, I cast into pocket water
where a Brown watches but then chooses
not to strike the timelessness of the past,
at the river’s edge.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Spence Sr Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 1:09 AM
This is an excellent post and a wonderful poem, my dear friend of God's inspirational grace, Chas. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message regarding the River's Edge." The descriptive excellence sends terrific images. The theme stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, with God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
Fenn Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 6:36 PM
What a great tribute to your father, especially in stanza 3. I lost my dad years ago, so I can relate to this. Sorry for your loss.
Sharma Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 3:00 PM
SO BEAUTIFULLY PRESENTED SIR..... SIR YOU ARE A RENOWNED POET PLEASE GO THROUGH MY POEMS AND YOUR GUIDANCE I WANNA GROW UP AS A POET... THANK YOU....
Lever Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 8:43 AM
I LOVE RIVERS, and your poem brought all the poignancy of your ritual and its blessing to his memory. A beautiful simple constructed yet powerfully moving poem. Well done, and thank you. xxxx
Logan Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 8:16 AM
Nice job! Blessings, Thama Logan
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