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River's Edge

Our fishing guide thought I wanted to catch fish – that I had come to the River’s Edge to catch a mottled Brown for a mantled photograph. I should have told him that I cared not for a fish for my father had recently passed away and I held his rod of beautiful bamboo. I had come only to cast into my memory’s mist – to hear the line sing my father’s song and again his voice arise from a riffle. Many mornings he held my hand to teach me to find the rhythm of the line then extend to mirror and become the water. From a rock, I cast into pocket water where a Brown watches but then chooses not to strike the timelessness of the past,
at the river’s edge.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/17/2020 1:09:00 AM
This is an excellent post and a wonderful poem, my dear friend of God's inspirational grace, Chas. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message regarding the River's Edge." The descriptive excellence sends terrific images. The theme stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, with God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
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Date: 12/16/2020 6:36:00 PM
What a great tribute to your father, especially in stanza 3. I lost my dad years ago, so I can relate to this. Sorry for your loss.
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Date: 12/15/2020 3:00:00 PM
SO BEAUTIFULLY PRESENTED SIR..... SIR YOU ARE A RENOWNED POET PLEASE GO THROUGH MY POEMS AND YOUR GUIDANCE I WANNA GROW UP AS A POET... THANK YOU....
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Date: 12/15/2020 8:43:00 AM
I LOVE RIVERS, and your poem brought all the poignancy of your ritual and its blessing to his memory. A beautiful simple constructed yet powerfully moving poem. Well done, and thank you. xxxx
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Date: 12/15/2020 8:16:00 AM
Nice job! Blessings, Thama Logan
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