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River Ziket

when you have lost destination move like the river Heidi Sands 8/14/20 Placed 3rd in - 2 Line Poem - Ziket Poetry Contest.

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2020 2:40:00 PM

super imagery heidi, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 2:54:00 PM

Thank you Jan :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2020 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A few words with much said. A wonderful write. Enjoy your win and your day..........

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 12:48:00 PM

Thank you very much Paula :)

John Lawless

Date: 8/18/2020 11:55:00 AM

...still....yet deep.....a wise suggestion

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 12:38:00 PM

Thank you John :)

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/18/2020 10:25:00 AM

Oh, very wise. love it Heidi. congrats on the win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 10:30:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/18/2020 8:45:00 AM

Nicely done ziket, dear Heidi:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Edward :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2020 8:34:00 AM

Back with congrats, my dear friend. Keep rowing along that Poetry River! Flow and Freedom, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Gershon :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/18/2020 7:32:00 AM

Oh, lovely and wise! Wonderfully done. Congratulations for your win! xomo

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/18/2020 8:07:00 AM

Thank you :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 8/17/2020 9:20:00 AM

Well written Heidi. I wish you good luck.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/17/2020 9:24:00 AM

Thank you very much Sandy :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/15/2020 9:38:00 PM

Nicely penned: Gotta get the 'flow' back! Sweet ziket, Heidi! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/16/2020 7:42:00 AM

Thank you very much Gershon :)

Silent One

Date: 8/15/2020 12:43:00 PM

Yes...Flow like water!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2020 1:13:00 PM

Yes. Let us flow ! to the destination of the ocean :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/15/2020 4:50:00 AM

Very clever! Well done.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2020 5:56:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I was hoping readers would get my underlying point. The river always has the destination of the ocean and a pleasant one to think about too! :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/15/2020 1:39:00 AM

That's a great idea... Lovely imagery...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2020 5:55:00 AM

Thank you Supraja :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/15/2020 1:06:00 AM

Love the image Heidi, hope that flowing river takes you to a beautiful place. Good luck Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/15/2020 5:54:00 AM

Thank you so much Tom. I imagine it taking me to the sea eventually. I appreciate your kind support :)