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River Line

RIVER LINE Zig-zag River Line clinging clay, mud, rocks, forests, habitats shines in the Sun under wide sky, looks sad in gloomy dense dark night. Little brittle ripples break on the brim. Lone weary sailor on aimless wherry. 023/03/17 syllables 8-8-8-8-10-10 River Lines Contest by Rick Parise

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Date: 3/7/2017 5:03:00 PM
This is a really nice one on River Line! Good luck . I never win with this guy on my river poems, but I keep crossing my fingers
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