River Gazing

A crazy world has lost it’s solitude;
the comfort in a crowd is where it’s great,
and all those childhood values once pursued,
appear to have succumbed to modern trait.

Befriend a dog, and you have won a mate,
they’ll comfort you through life, and you through there’s,
and for you the crowds of comfort have to wait,
as you cement a bond that no one shares.

But the ravages of time, and death almost due,
no turning back the clock, or magic hand
can unite us in a world that we both knew;
now it’s river walks alone along the sand.

What I should see is water flowing by,
but it’s images of Tom, that catch my eye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Canerdy Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Good sonnet--very moving. Janice
Laurie Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 12:16 AM
Hello Janice … thank you Janice. To lose a mate after sixteen years deserves a nice remembrance verse. I think most of us poets like to preserve something or someone we lose - Lindsay
Capitano Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Hauntingly sad, Laurie, such a fine inspiration for your first sonnet. Nice job.
Laurie Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 12:13 AM
G'day Phil … thank you reading and commenting. It's taken me a while to understand the flow and topics that suit a sonnet best - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 7:43 PM
What a poignant tribute to Tom. This was your first sonnet?? WEll done!!
Laurie Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 12:11 AM
Hello Andrea … thank you for your comment, and I will thank you for your sonnet posts. It was reading your proper sonnets that helped me understand the flow pattern - catch you soon Andrea - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Again Lindsay such a touching poem of how life has become, what we can make it and how a river that flows is the cue for your remembering Tom. So well penned - loved it! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 9:49 PM
G'day Jennifer … when living in Sunraysia, we took Tommy on a weekly basis to spend time along the Murray River. I'm pleased you enjoyed my first attempt at a sonnet - Lindsay
Canerdy Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 7:00 AM
This is so moving, Lindsay! Janice
Laurie Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 9:46 PM
Thank you for reading Janice. It's a hard time when you lose a long time mate (dog) - Lindsay
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January 29, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Beautiful tribute to (I assume is) your dog, Tom. Very touching write, old mate! Bob
Laurie Avatar
February 1, 2019 at 12:39 AM
Yes Robert … after sixteen and a half years. A bit hard to get over for a while - thanks Robert - Lindsay
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