River

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Written: September 02, 2023 H or R Pleiades Poetry Sponsored by: Joseph May _______________________________________________________________ Roller rake up running rekt Real rush river ruins Rolling in regard to rocks Rowing reduces recess Reaching river's record rate Rivers rang rooted record Renewal reports recurs

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/2/2023 11:39:00 PM

Really remarkable rendition, river related. Reaping rewards, reassured. x

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/2/2023 7:29:00 PM

A very imaginative take on the contest with your rich rolling river of R's, hope it's a winner for you~

Eve Roper

Date: 9/2/2023 3:41:00 PM

Great alteration, Lasaad. Good luck my friend.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/2/2023 11:25:00 AM

Those alliterations are so good and creative. I’ve tried few for this contest too and might post. But your diction and flow and the way you’ve made all those words go so well together is beyond creative. I love river as title and how you’ve written “ real rush river ruins” so good! Excellent pleiades

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2023 10:58:00 AM

- I love looking for "nice" stones in the river ... lovely written, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs