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"RISING SUN " MY PHOTO, ©

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Good morning rising sun, ruler of the sky What you have in store for me today, I ignore However, one thing I wish so much to know: Would I be still there at sunset you to adore? © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 January 2019

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/20/2019 1:36:00 AM

Hi Demtrios, There is a thought provoking question within in this lovely write. Well done:-) Alexis

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/17/2019 4:58:00 AM

A gentle reminder of what life is :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/17/2019 6:15:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear, Swetha!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/16/2019 12:16:00 AM

A lovely metaphor for life Demetrios! Gorgeous flower too! : ) xxoo

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/17/2019 6:16:00 AM

thank you!

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 1/7/2019 1:14:00 AM

The next minute is never guaranteed, this is a lyrical reminder of that lesson!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/17/2019 6:16:00 AM

Thank you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/6/2019 7:18:00 AM

Very potent question we all face my friend..keep the faith Demetrios for all of us. Have a wonderful day.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/6/2019 12:37:00 PM

So wonderful to see you my friend, Vijay! Thank you so very much!

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/6/2019 6:03:00 AM

Just what I needed to read and see today. Beautiful poem and flower. Thank you Demetrios :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/6/2019 12:36:00 PM

After reading your posts today I understand now better your comment! Thank you dearest, Heidi! God bless you!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/6/2019 3:43:00 AM

WoW! Demetrios, You have penned such a well written and profound write.Life as we know it would not be the same without the sun. Excellent job my wise friend. Happy New Year's to you and your loved ones:-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/6/2019 12:35:00 PM

You are so kind and sweet my friend, Alexis! Thank you very much! Happy New Year! xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/6/2019 3:14:00 AM

We go out each day never knowing what is in store for us. We can only hope that we can be there at the days end. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/6/2019 12:34:00 PM

This is the issue I raise my friend, Tom! A truth that we all live by! Thank you my friend!