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Mars and Venus by Sydney Harold Meteyard

 

Honeysuckle blooms and between my teeth, I tease it
like nipples on a lover's chest, so sweet though milk
is long gone. Salt and sweet the breast, my tongue flits
amongst love's sweat. Her skin fluid as Chinese silk.  
Her juices flow; the ripest mango slit submits   
as tears fill the hollow of her throat. None are her ilk,
but I, Mars, know She who has rises from the foam. 
Worship her who causes worlds to writhe and moan.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/1/2015 10:14:00 PM
Debbie, this is so beautifully penned, a wonderful 7 and congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my haiku 10 and for the encouraging comment
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:13:00 PM
Hola DG. Congrats on your SWEATS AND SWEETS win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/30/2015 12:05:00 AM
Debbie, this is a nice sweet win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2015 6:21:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Debbie: congratulations!
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Date: 6/28/2015 4:18:00 PM
Sensual imagery that appeals to the senses. I give you top marks for a delightful offering. Congratulations on this fine win, Debbie! // paul
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Date: 6/28/2015 3:05:00 PM
Many congratulations Debbie on your placing in Olive's contest, James :) :)
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Date: 6/28/2015 10:34:00 AM
Debbie, I find your poem really that descriptive! Beautiful and intricately done! ~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 6/15/2015 9:34:00 AM
This is a hot one Debbie! I expect it will do well. The best I have read so far.
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:26:00 AM
wow, hope this gets a high place in olive's contest
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Date: 6/15/2015 2:25:00 AM
- Beautiful poem, Debbie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:18:00 PM
Debbie, love the write and the photo. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:16:00 PM
Loved the sensual images of the lovers Mars and Venus. Beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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