Risen

With arms wide open up towards His father He did go Summoning the angels, as they raised Him He radiated earth, with afterglow ! Loving eyes once pierced lie still, instilled with Love and Over-Shine! Fifty days of Pentecost, and no, He never counted cost* Holy flames of Faith upon their blessed heads the consecrated flame of sweet anoint. He rose and then He Reigned King of all Kings from heaven's lair A Father who deserves to be crowned let us thank Him, for we were lost and now we're found...

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/25/2024 10:05:00 AM

Just love this. Congrats and God bless you this Easter. Love, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/18/2024 9:22:00 AM

Indeed He is risen and so paved the way for the forgiveness of sins. Lovely poem.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/18/2024 7:16:00 AM

Dear Rose, You have beautifully captured the essence of resurrection and the profound significance of Christ's ascension. Through explicit imagery and heartfelt language, you convey the transcendent power of faith and divine love. The imagery of holy flames and heavenly reign evokes a sense of reverence and awe. I love how your words inspire gratitude and reflection on the transformative power of redemption. Rose this is a moving tribute to the risen Christ. - Blessings, Daniel

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/18/2024 5:52:00 AM

Words of faith reverberate throughout, my friend. A graceful prayer you convey, Vienna. Splendid write.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/17/2024 4:51:00 PM

a truly gentle, faith-filled, and inspirational write, dear Rose. I especially liked the last three lines for they remind me of the song "Amazing Grace"-one of my favorite hymns. I enjoy your soft and smooth poetic voice. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 3/17/2024 6:45:00 PM

Thank you for reading it and commenting Sara, have a peaceful evening, :)