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Rise and Set With the Sun

*There is nothing wrong, I am just writing on contest theme In case I am here, one minute and gone the next, I will tell you, “I love you” now, before my time is done There is no bigger regret, than words left unsaid I know from the past, how it can haunt the soul My love for you will be never ending, this I know I hope your heart will always feel it, whether now or later Today, the sun is shining bright, tomorrow there may be none So here are my words for you, to rise and set with the sun Heidi Sands 10/5/19

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/6/2019 12:13:00 PM

Heidi, if Line doesn't just love this poem, my name isn't Wershon Golf! Seriously, it is beautiful, so true, and I do think Line will really love it. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/6/2019 12:22:00 PM

That is nice to hear Gershon! Thank you for the encouraging support :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/5/2019 2:47:00 PM

So much truth and wisdom in these words: There is no bigger regret, than words left unsaid I know from the past, how it can haunt the soul. Great advise.. to rise and set with the sun. All the best, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/5/2019 2:54:00 PM

Thank you very much Vijay! I appreciate your positive feedback on this. (soupmail)