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Rise and Fall

RISE AND FALL his eyes undress hers slowly timid lashes lower her face a cherub-red chili pepper a skinny strap slides off her shoulder revealing snow-white skin wedding vows allow this night flickers candlelight of passion this tempest shall not pass this way again with scoring waves lapping over silken sheets the roar of sweat & whispers the peak of everest intense the depth of falling into bliss 11/12/2017

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Date: 11/18/2017 4:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Well done.
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Date: 11/18/2017 12:50:00 PM
This is a sizzling win! Congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Faye! <3
Date: 11/14/2017 1:11:00 PM
Such a passion fruit write, Kim. It brings back memories of the first day of marital bliss. A treasured memory that still glows throughout the years of cold reality. Beautiful poem, dear. Love and smiles always.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 2:10:00 PM
Even in your comments, the poet comes out! Thanks, my friend!
Date: 11/13/2017 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations Kim on your second place win with this passionate and beautifully written poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 7:17:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 11/13/2017 1:37:00 PM
A very passionate poem. A lot of deep feeling. Congratulations on you win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Alfred!
Date: 11/13/2017 11:17:00 AM
Where's my fan?!! Congrats on your win with this smokin' hot, REALLY good poem, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 3:18:00 PM
Thank you Janice :) Smiling
Date: 11/13/2017 11:17:00 AM
Where's my fan?!! Congrats on your win with this smokin' hot, REALLY good poem, Kim!
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Date: 11/13/2017 8:40:00 AM
Whee dogies — the smoke detector went off over here!!! Nice ~ j
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 3:19:00 PM
LOL! Thanks lim’rik!
Date: 11/13/2017 8:32:00 AM
Beautiful, Kim. Congrats on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Dale!
Date: 11/13/2017 8:13:00 AM
Kim, this is amazingly beautiful, packed with intense imagery and powerful emotion. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 3:20:00 PM
Thanks Sandra! xx
Date: 11/13/2017 4:13:00 AM
Creative work. I love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Solomon!
Date: 11/13/2017 2:14:00 AM
Love the journey this takes us on. Great write, Kim. Congratulations on your win! Regards, John.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2017 6:26:00 AM
Thank you John <3
Date: 11/12/2017 3:29:00 PM
A lovely romantic poem! Well written, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/12/2017 6:17:00 PM
Thank you Vijay!

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