Ripple

the moon face in placid lake, fragmented to pieces by a ripple Feb.17. 2023 ~ Placed First~ A Ripple to me Poetry Contest Sponsor- JCB Brul

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/23/2023 8:01:00 AM

Good one. Congratulations on it being a winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2023 3:30:00 PM

such a divine image. Congrats to you

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/18/2023 9:08:00 PM

A beautiful Monoku. Moon is fragmented. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/17/2023 7:57:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/17/2023 1:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your "Ripple" write. Have a great day/weekend...............

Arlo Parker

Date: 2/17/2023 9:52:00 AM

Powerful mini poem indeed. ~;o]

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/17/2023 9:33:00 AM

Your poetic soul just shines in this Valsa! This reminds me of Claire de Lune by Debussy as it flows in ripples with beauty and grace! So peaceful and serene. Blessings dear friend and congratulations on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2023 9:26:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Valsa -

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/17/2023 6:06:00 AM

Such a wonderfully expressed Monoku, Valsa. Profound and evocative. Good luck with the contest

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/17/2023 5:59:00 AM

A moment beautifully captured, Valsa. Best to you.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 2/17/2023 1:33:00 AM

Great Monoku, dear Valsa. Best for a win.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/16/2023 10:03:00 PM

Valsa, the moon like shards of undulating silver, dancing in sync with the sensuous miniscule waves of water. This Monoku---a mesmerizer!...ab

Valsa George
Date: 2/17/2023 9:13:00 PM

Anselmo, your comment on ripple is far more beautiful than my monoku ! Thanks a lot.