Rip

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Let 'er Rip, Go. I think I can, I think I can. I thought I could, I thought I could. Maybe not! R.I.P.

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Terry Flood

Date: 7/11/2021 3:49:00 PM

Dig the humour, John. Congrats on your win. Terry

John Anderson
Date: 7/11/2021 3:57:00 PM

Thanks very much Terry. Cheers

John Lawless

Date: 7/11/2021 12:58:00 PM

and like the "Little Engine" we just keep chugging along. Love the playful take on the R.I.P......

John Anderson
Date: 7/11/2021 1:30:00 PM

Thanks for the competition . Fractured a few classic chugging lines . But what the heck. Thanks Cheers

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/11/2021 11:09:00 AM

Creative entry. Congratulations on your well deserved win

John Anderson
Date: 7/11/2021 11:16:00 AM

Thanks very much for your kind thoughts. Cheers and Best Wishes

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/11/2021 9:08:00 AM

Very creative John. Congratulations on your win.

John Anderson
Date: 7/11/2021 10:24:00 AM

Thanks for that, puns always do me in

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/11/2021 7:43:00 AM

Well written. Congratulations!

John Anderson
Date: 7/11/2021 10:24:00 AM

Thanks for that. Great to hear from you