Right Woman Or Not

All the women I have loved.
Have seemed to come from above.
Except one who cast a spell.
She's the one from hell.


Written for John Freeman's "Love or Humor" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 7:39 PM
Good one for the funny aspect of this contest, Jimmy. Congratulations to you!
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
Roberts Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 10:42 AM
good one JImmy, congrats on your win in the contest
Ruebel Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 10:36 AM
Hello Jimmy, Ha, I am still laughing at this one. Very witty and wonderful my friend. Congratulations on your win.... As Always, Shar
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Jimmy sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
Duffin Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Hello Jimmy . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write.How right this is . Eamon
Johnson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 8:26 PM
Congratulations on this humorous dodoitsu. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest, JAM!!!!! Love, Annalise
Onclaud Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 5:37 PM
don;t we love bad girls??? congrats, jimmy! whoo hoo..:) nette
Sweetheart Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu .. enjoy another top tenner my friend with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:06 PM
This is really witty, Jimmy. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Jimmy
Freeman Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:45 PM
A man needs at least one of thoes in his life time Jimmy, so that he can appreciate one from heaven. Lol! I had one of thoes one time! smile. Congratulations on your 2nt place Agape, Moses
Pettit Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:34 PM
From the results of the contest, it appears John liked the ones with rhyming best. Congratulations on your win.
Beesley Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Short,toxic,and sweet...thanx for reading my rhymes
Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 12:33 PM
Is she the babe or not, from there she'll definately be hot. Good luck in the contest Jimmy....:)
Freeman Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 12:19 PM
Jimmy, thanks for you consistent support of my contest, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses
Wilson Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 6:22 PM
You definetly want to stay away from a woman like that Jimmy! Good one..best of luck..love,Deb
Poet Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Wow!This is excellent.Goodluck in the contest.
Haick Avatar
January 13, 2011 at 11:06 AM
Great entry for John's contest, JAM. Love, Audrey
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