Right Woman Or Not

All the women I have loved.
Have seemed to come from above.
Except one who cast a spell.
She's the one from hell.


Written for John Freeman's "Love or Humor" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/17/2011 7:39:00 PM
Good one for the funny aspect of this contest, Jimmy. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:42:00 AM
good one JImmy, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:36:00 AM
Hello Jimmy, Ha, I am still laughing at this one. Very witty and wonderful my friend. Congratulations on your win.... As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/17/2011 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Jimmy sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2011 4:39:00 AM
Hello Jimmy . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write.How right this is . Eamon
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:26:00 PM
Congratulations on this humorous dodoitsu. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest, JAM!!!!! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:37:00 PM
don;t we love bad girls??? congrats, jimmy! whoo hoo..:) nette
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Date: 1/16/2011 5:36:00 PM
Congrats Jimmy on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu .. enjoy another top tenner my friend with luv..
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:06:00 PM
This is really witty, Jimmy. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Jimmy
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:45:00 PM
A man needs at least one of thoes in his life time Jimmy, so that he can appreciate one from heaven. Lol! I had one of thoes one time! smile. Congratulations on your 2nt place Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:34:00 PM
From the results of the contest, it appears John liked the ones with rhyming best. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:07:00 PM
Short,toxic,and sweet...thanx for reading my rhymes
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Date: 1/16/2011 12:33:00 PM
Is she the babe or not, from there she'll definately be hot. Good luck in the contest Jimmy....:)
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Date: 1/15/2011 12:19:00 PM
Jimmy, thanks for you consistent support of my contest, it doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:22:00 PM
You definetly want to stay away from a woman like that Jimmy! Good one..best of luck..love,Deb
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:57:00 AM
Wow!This is excellent.Goodluck in the contest.
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:06:00 AM
Great entry for John's contest, JAM. Love, Audrey
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