Riding the Rim of Dreams

Oh, he shakes out his old blanket
And stirs that dying fire,
Watching dim embers star black sky
As wolves and snakes conspire

To make his sleeping uneasy
With thoughts of strays and streams,
As long restless sleep comes slowly
Riding the rim of dreams.

Low fire calls his name and crackles 
Like a girl in Broken Bow,
That he promised he would marry
Before he had to go.

Now coyotes croon his story—
Sing sad and lonely tales
Of that old cowboy’s far travels
Down mountainsides and trails.

And like his life, that old campfire
Burns low and then flares high,
As he drifts off in welcome sleep
Not dreaming that he’ll die.

They’ll find him in the orange dawn,
Stone still by ash mesquite,
The last remains of man’s efforts—
All stories told and complete.

Now soft sleep comes much more easy
Or to his friends it seems,
All his long trails have now lessened
As he rides the rim of dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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Mason Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Absolutely beautiful write, Glen !! Great imagery and it reads like a ballad. Congratulations to you and the PoetrySoup staff on an excellent selection to be a feature this week at the Soup!!
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August 1, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. God bless. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2009 at 6:16 AM
that's really neat---never have read a poem on the subject--nice, for a chnage and well written
Fraser Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 2:58 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>>James
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July 27, 2009 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Glen. Love, Carol
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July 27, 2009 at 1:36 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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July 26, 2009 at 6:24 PM
Good use of imagery for an interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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