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Riding into the sunset Good that you could go with me Enjoying the beauty together God granted us a reprieve Just a short time of beauty To feast in the gifts of his love Hoping for many more sunsets Colors varying each day of our abode Some day maybe we can stroll Soaking up the last of the rays Just hold hands and be raptured Into the sunset we'll just walk away (Thoughts after a beautiful sunset October 25, 2009 and today the poem was just in a flowing form whatever that form happens to be. Reprieve here means a temporary relief (from stress in our lives).)

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Date: 10/29/2009 7:59:00 PM
nicley written, hope it will be as you want, dear mom. love ya
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Date: 10/29/2009 8:26:00 AM
A beautiful sunset, what a way to get away from it all...good write..thanks on the little town in SD..those geese, I agree with you I don't know they make it,just amazing..Thanks Danny
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Date: 10/28/2009 6:24:00 PM
thank you Sara. We need all those reprieves we can get. Robert
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Date: 10/28/2009 2:46:00 PM
Lovely poem Sara, your words picture nice images >> James
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Date: 10/28/2009 1:36:00 PM
A true beauty...this poem.
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Date: 10/28/2009 10:10:00 AM
Hi Sara, lovely poem. Thank you for your comments on 'Parents'. I don't have much time to play guitar and keyboard anymore it takes a lot of practice. I work full time so it is very hard to fit everything into my life. Maybe when I retire I might be able to find more time for my hobbies which include painting and drawing. Love Pam.
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Date: 10/28/2009 10:09:00 AM
It is a brighter day for me today after reading your wonderful poetry. I wish you a wonderful day filled with love and inspirationSara . Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2009 8:24:00 AM
Sara thank you for your welcome blog comment today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/28/2009 7:51:00 AM
I love the spontaneity of the moment when poems come alive in my mind, revealed of the heart. They are so alive, and reveal so much more of the inner self, than the mind ever could apart from the heart.Thanks for sharing Sara. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/28/2009 7:18:00 AM
Lovely poem, and peaceful serenity comes in reading it. Enjoy the moments given to us! ~ the walk in the sunset is one of those moments! Love, Carrie
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